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Array ( [sid] => 52552 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => It's Over [time] => 2004-06-18 11:09:35 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Time goes by
You look on but say nothing
It's over
And I've given up everything

I dreamed of you
But like it all dreams change
We know each other
But to each other we seem strange

Last year's rain
This time I watched sunshine
Sarcastic smile
Once you too were mine

What doesn't matter
Is closest to my heart always
Don't you see
I believe that I am hopeless

You might love me
But you never confess you only stare
You might not love me
And I try to pretend that I don't care [comments] => 7 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 22 [informant] => New_York_Chick [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

It's Over

Contributed by New_York_Chick on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 11:09:35 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Time goes by
You look on but say nothing
It's over
And I've given up everything

I dreamed of you
But like it all dreams change
We know each other
But to each other we seem strange

Last year's rain
This time I watched sunshine
Sarcastic smile
Once you too were mine

What doesn't matter
Is closest to my heart always
Don't you see
I believe that I am hopeless

You might love me
But you never confess you only stare
You might not love me
And I try to pretend that I don't care

Copyright © New_York_Chick ... [ 2004-06-18 11:09:35]
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Re: It's Over (User Rating: 1 )
by JT on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 11:17:23 AM AEST
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nice write. good flow. like the last verse alot.
keep em coming
-jt-

Re: It's Over (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 11:24:07 AM AEST
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good write,

pixie xx

Re: It's Over (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 12:03:18 PM AEST
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Enjoyable write. Sad emotions. It is hard to care for someone so much and not know if they care for you. Difficult time.

Rita

Re: It's Over (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 02:17:00 PM AEST
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How true -
I thought this was nice -

Re: It's Over (User Rating: 1 )
by luckycharm on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 02:57:34 PM AEST
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Hey. It's good to read your poetry again!!!. I feel you on the whole relationship thing. Just some advice for you okay. "Looks can be deceiving" so find someone that you know that love and cares for you and loves you for who you are.-luckycharm.

Re: It's Over (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 09:54:07 PM AEST
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good poem I liked the flow as well and the emotion that you insert in all your poems. Beautiful...

Bobo (Joel)

Re: It's Over (User Rating: 1 )
by Beautifully-Imperfect on Wednesday, 1st September 2010 @ 01:43:06 AM AEST
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I love it ^_^

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