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Array ( [sid] => 5253 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The box [time] => 2002-10-18 08:00:00 [hometext] => Feeling down recently, is where I'm at.
Hoping by jotting my thoughts down, will bring me back. [bodytext] => In the box ,I don't want to be
alone with my thoughts.
Afraid of these feelings consumming me
how to get out, I plainly forgot.
I must get through this
before I am missed.
In the box, I don't want to be
so dark and gloomy is how I feel.
Four walls closing in around me
must remember to breath.
The shadows surrounding my body
like hot prickly fingers, grabbing at me.
In this box, I don't want to be
please help me. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 32 [informant] => jackee_line [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

The box

Contributed by jackee_line on Friday, 18th October 2002 @ 08:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

In the box ,I don't want to be
alone with my thoughts.
Afraid of these feelings consumming me
how to get out, I plainly forgot.
I must get through this
before I am missed.
In the box, I don't want to be
so dark and gloomy is how I feel.
Four walls closing in around me
must remember to breath.
The shadows surrounding my body
like hot prickly fingers, grabbing at me.
In this box, I don't want to be
please help me.

Copyright © jackee_line ... [ 2002-10-18 08:00:00]
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Re: The box (User Rating: 1 )
by Rocks on Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 10:52:36 PM AEST
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i've had times like these. i hope you will find(or probably you already found) your way out. very strong words; almost make me claustrophobic.

Re: The box (User Rating: 1 )
by LayDownPlayDead on Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 12:13:09 PM AEST
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I think alot of people feel like this sometimes. Some people feel like this more than others, I can relate to you. Good Write.

Re: The box (User Rating: 1 )
by riverofwords on Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 07:00:11 AM AEST
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been there done that ..great write

peace be your journey

terry

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