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~You Made Me~

You made me rise to my feet again
when the world had me down on my knees.
You made me reach out and pick up this pen.
Watch these words flow through like a breeze.

You made me see the stars in the sky,
feel the wind whip across my face.
You made me wipe my teary eye,
now this life I can truely embrace.

You made my heart resume its beat,
how it felt so cold and still.
You made my soul feel whole and complete,
all your dreams I hope to fulfill.

You made me anxious to start a new day,
bright eyed,happy,and free.
What you've done for me is hard to portray.
You made me....me

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~You made me~

Contributed by RonMiller on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 01:20:09 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

~You Made Me~

You made me rise to my feet again
when the world had me down on my knees.
You made me reach out and pick up this pen.
Watch these words flow through like a breeze.

You made me see the stars in the sky,
feel the wind whip across my face.
You made me wipe my teary eye,
now this life I can truely embrace.

You made my heart resume its beat,
how it felt so cold and still.
You made my soul feel whole and complete,
all your dreams I hope to fulfill.

You made me anxious to start a new day,
bright eyed,happy,and free.
What you've done for me is hard to portray.
You made me....me

Copyright © RonMiller ... [ 2004-06-18 01:20:09]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: ~You made me~ (User Rating: 1 )
by BrandySwanson on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 01:23:31 AM AEST
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this was a great poem. well done

Brandy

Re: ~You made me~ (User Rating: 1 )
by SnowB on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 04:20:58 AM AEST
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Dearest Ron..This piece is so very beautiful and the flow is perfection. You have been the sweetest friend to me. Your heart shines in your poetry and I can't tell you how much this poem means to me. You have touched my life and given me your warm friendship and I will always treasure that. Thank you.

Always....Lena

Re: ~You made me~ (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 05:50:08 AM AEST
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wow, this is a lovely dedication,if I was SnowB I would be very impressed and flattered :)

takecare
Pixie xx

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