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Liar
Contributed by
Luinil
on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 08:22:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Eternally open cave
Unsheathe your blade
Retching flowers
Beautiful lies, hidden thorns
Hollow and dead inside
Sharp tongue butchers
You alone, all others fallen
Copyright ©
Luinil
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2004-06-17 20:22:30] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Liar
(User Rating: 1 ) by JT on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 08:59:02 PM AEST (User
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nice write. good imagery. I know the feeling. seems like lying and cheating is second nature for some.
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Re: Liar
(User Rating: 1 ) by pyrofairyburning on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 09:30:20 PM AEST (User
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Welcome to human nature. All of man kind always has, and always will, skrew the rest of mankind. Anywho, good insight. Good read. 8 or so out of 10 |
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Re: Liar
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 10:22:56 PM AEST (User
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nice and vivid. |
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Re: Liar
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kie on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 08:18:08 AM AEST (User
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Very powerful and I agree the imagery was fantastic.
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