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Array ( [sid] => 5247 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => another scar [time] => 2002-10-18 06:30:00 [hometext] => please forgive me that all my poems are so depressing, but my life is in crisis right now...
[bodytext] => i don't know how to feel anymore
as if all nerves have just been zapped
hypocrisy has sucked the marrow
from every bone in my tired body
and what i see is what i get
the world is screwed and so am i
he kissed my lips not knowing
the danger he was getting into when he did

it's not my fault
i'd love to be normal
to just put my head down and sleep away
these tired afternoons
but instead i care too much
i bleed and live
under overpasses
in dirty clubs
sacrificing myself to mosh pits

i want to forgive
i want to be treated like a human being
stupid girls with blond hair
sneer at me
making me sick
as they take away my humanity
making me just another face

what can i do?
i've tried to live
my eyes are so dark brown, they seem black
and they get darker
with every ounce of pain i feel
with every scar i'm shamed to carry
with every tear that sneaks down my cheek
when you, or he, or anyone
isn't looking
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 214 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Blue [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

another scar

Contributed by Blue on Friday, 18th October 2002 @ 06:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

i don't know how to feel anymore
as if all nerves have just been zapped
hypocrisy has sucked the marrow
from every bone in my tired body
and what i see is what i get
the world is screwed and so am i
he kissed my lips not knowing
the danger he was getting into when he did

it's not my fault
i'd love to be normal
to just put my head down and sleep away
these tired afternoons
but instead i care too much
i bleed and live
under overpasses
in dirty clubs
sacrificing myself to mosh pits

i want to forgive
i want to be treated like a human being
stupid girls with blond hair
sneer at me
making me sick
as they take away my humanity
making me just another face

what can i do?
i've tried to live
my eyes are so dark brown, they seem black
and they get darker
with every ounce of pain i feel
with every scar i'm shamed to carry
with every tear that sneaks down my cheek
when you, or he, or anyone
isn't looking

Copyright © Blue ... [ 2002-10-18 06:30:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: another scar (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 18th October 2002 @ 04:12:06 PM AEST
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I've been reading your poetry and please don't apologize for them being depressing. Writing is a way to vent the things you are feeling and constantly thinking about, and if it helps then by all means please keep doing it. Your writing is filled with so much indecision and anxiety among other emotions. I can't pretend that I know what your feeling so I'm not going to be fake, but I can tell you that things have a way of working out. After all after you've hit bottom the only way is up.....I hope things get brighter for you...will be thinking of you.

Re: another scar (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 19th October 2002 @ 01:15:05 AM AEST
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I hope things work out for you this is really deep! I also agree with the other comment poetry is a way to get the inners out! So keep writing & open up It helps !!!! Good luck! Guest

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