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Blind
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 01:43:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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i lost everything
i lost the pictures in my mind
the fresh life of the world
the blue oceans
the crisp sky
the sun
my lovers face
i lost it all
and because i couldnt see
i couldnt feel
and i became cold
an outcast
not worthy
incomplete
unfinished
like a poem with no....
its a sin to waste my senses
but since ive lost my world
ive lost all of them
love inst a sense its a feeling
by seeing the beauty
by feeliing and seeing the love
but i cannot feel
i cannot see you looking at me
eyes filled with my love
anymore....
i cry and cannot see who's watching
i laugh
and wonder if anyone is there
i hear a voice
and believe its in my mind
but when i dream
i see it all again
your face smiling
i feel the damp pillow
and tuck the cover around of me
since your not here to hug me
i stand up
and try to look out at the stary sky
and for the first time
i see a shooting star
is this a sign
i believe your here now..
my lord
am i returning home
i can see...
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Hannah_Heaven
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2004-06-17 13:43:33]
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Re: Blind
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 03:46:53 PM AEST
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there is a insomiac feel about this and an almost mental lapse which youve captured
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