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Array ( [sid] => 52372 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Be With You [time] => 2004-06-17 10:57:13 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I wish that I could be with you
My head upon your chest
Listening to thebeating of your heart
As we relax and rest
I wish I could be with you
To toss my cares away
To have some fun and laughter
If only for that day
I wish that I could be with you
When tears have stained my face
To have you kiss them away
Until they are erased
I wish I could be with you
More than just now and then
To feel your lips when you kiss mine
I'm breathless once again
I wish that I could be with you
To linger in your smile
To find a way into your heart
And stay in there awhile.
I wish I could be with you
To say three words to you
To try and read what's in your heart
When those three words are through [comments] => 3 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 2 [informant] => RhythmBndt [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Be With You

Contributed by RhythmBndt on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 10:57:13 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I wish that I could be with you
My head upon your chest
Listening to thebeating of your heart
As we relax and rest
I wish I could be with you
To toss my cares away
To have some fun and laughter
If only for that day
I wish that I could be with you
When tears have stained my face
To have you kiss them away
Until they are erased
I wish I could be with you
More than just now and then
To feel your lips when you kiss mine
I'm breathless once again
I wish that I could be with you
To linger in your smile
To find a way into your heart
And stay in there awhile.
I wish I could be with you
To say three words to you
To try and read what's in your heart
When those three words are through

Copyright © RhythmBndt ... [ 2004-06-17 10:57:13]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Be With You (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 11:20:20 AM AEST
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I wish that I could be with you
To linger in your smile
To find a way into your heart
And stay in there awhile.

i loved this bit, such a great poem.........well done

pixie xx

Re: Be With You (User Rating: 1 )
by SweetRhythm on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 11:22:36 AM AEST
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5/5 Absolutly delighful poem. Excellent write & very enjoyable read. You have great talent.
Keep them coming. I look forward to more.
Corinna

Re: Be With You (User Rating: 1 )
by SnowB on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 10:47:29 AM AEST
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I know these feelings all too well...you have expressed the longing to be with your love very well in this piece..wonderful write.

Lena

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