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screams to wake the dead
lungs on fire
stomach turning
so they call this sleep

inspired to find inspiration
success in empties
twelve steps to freedom
the latter topples
we'd scream but the rope's too tight

as you lay in the box
when you find your "friends" at their best
before they close the lid
gun in hand for nostalgia
they talk of your better days
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it was a white trash christmas turned soap opera and oh yeah the pope was there

Contributed by TaintedOptomist on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 10:41:04 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

sweat soaked sheets
screams to wake the dead
lungs on fire
stomach turning
so they call this sleep

inspired to find inspiration
success in empties
twelve steps to freedom
the latter topples
we'd scream but the rope's too tight

as you lay in the box
when you find your "friends" at their best
before they close the lid
gun in hand for nostalgia
they talk of your better days
vomiting blood on white tile

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Re: it was a white trash christmas turned soap opera and oh yeah the pope was there (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 10:51:36 AM AEST
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very strong images - interesting write -

merry

Re: it was a white trash christmas turned soap opera and oh yeah the pope was there (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 11:24:42 AM AEST
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yes this was an intresting write, i enjoyed reading it very much as I write some equally off the wall stuff sometimes lol great poem

pixie xx

Re: it was a white trash christmas turned soap opera and oh yeah the pope was there (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 12:21:16 PM AEST
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I love it... though I'm not sure exactly what the meaning is... but it IS great poetry!

Re: it was a white trash christmas turned soap opera and oh yeah the pope was there (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 12:55:27 PM AEST
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your imagery and description is great *

Re: it was a white trash christmas turned soap opera and oh yeah the pope was there (User Rating: 1 )
by creed on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 01:40:32 PM AEST
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its about the nightmare you've been having. I'm 99% sure that it is. its actually an interesting way of describing your nightmare. I love you Klay!!!!!! cya

Re: it was a white trash christmas turned soap opera and oh yeah the pope was there (User Rating: 1 )
by TwEeK on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 06:56:54 PM AEST
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niceeee real nice poem there....hehehhehe i liked the title.......really good wording you used...keep it up

tweeky

Re: it was a white trash christmas turned soap opera and oh yeah the pope was there (User Rating: 1 )
by TaintedOptomist on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 08:14:47 PM AEST
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well i put quite a few things in there: interperitation of a nightmare,sexual frutrastion,needing a break from sobriety due to above said frustrations(need my endorphine rush). feeling hopeless and suicidal, and past flings with drugs tell me if you see any other angles in there i case i didn't see anything cos' i haven't slept in a while...again endorphines are needed..or sleeping pills

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