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Array ( [sid] => 52340 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => DON'T KNOW BUT [time] => 2004-06-17 05:34:53 [hometext] => Inspiration: Clayton Crowley. His write OUR DREAMS at poetrybox.com. He discribe it as searching for love or something. [bodytext] =>

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Was talking 'bout his dreams
n all them good things.
Was about looking for love.
You know, like awesome doves?

Don't know but be glad
2 help you look like mad.
Don''t know, it's elluded me too.
Maybe we can find it true.

Think got real close at times
but key, never did find.
Always thought if was here
wouldn't ever let it get away, dear.

Luv should meld hearts, souls.
Live past anything, You know?
Gets scarry at times
but when it comes, it's mine.

by
Emy Star

Copyright © Emy Star

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DON'T KNOW BUT

Contributed by emystar on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 05:34:53 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

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Was talking 'bout his dreams
n all them good things.
Was about looking for love.
You know, like awesome doves?

Don't know but be glad
2 help you look like mad.
Don''t know, it's elluded me too.
Maybe we can find it true.

Think got real close at times
but key, never did find.
Always thought if was here
wouldn't ever let it get away, dear.

Luv should meld hearts, souls.
Live past anything, You know?
Gets scarry at times
but when it comes, it's mine.

by
Emy Star

Copyright © Emy Star

Copyright Â© emystar ... [ 2004-06-17 05:34:53]
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Re: DON'T KNOW BUT (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 05:42:37 AM AEST
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oooh awesome emy!
I really love the flow and how it all melts together...
it sounds so natural...
oh and i LOVE the first verse and in particular,
the line:
"you know, like awesome doves?"
I really liek the comparison made there
and how it's used in the simile...
oooh emy this poem is sooo cool!!!
I love it!
Keep 'em coming!
_.:'~Katie~':._

Re: DON'T KNOW BUT (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 01:55:08 AM AEST
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Little Emy,
What a ominious picture.......a staircase to Heaven......Heavenly Love.......this was an especially good loving write by you.
I like the way you write my dear.
Keep them coming.....they are always welcome here.
love
mom

Re: DON'T KNOW BUT (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 11:29:15 AM AEST
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Nice, I think this is a beautiful poem.
Luv should melt hearts, souls
Live past anything, you know
gets scarry at times
But when it come, it's mine

Are just awsome lines. God bess you. Take care. Peace out.

Re: DON'T KNOW BUT (User Rating: 1 )
by rugby_player on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 12:08:18 AM AEST
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This poem rocks..I loved it. It makes one think about love.......and how hard it is to attain these days great job

Re: DON'T KNOW BUT (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 08:40:02 AM AEST
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Emy Star,
Beautiful soothing picture, not sure where you found that one but it went wonderful with your lovely write, take care Val

Re: DON'T KNOW BUT (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:09:20 AM AEST
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Wow Emy..you have built up steps to beautiful heaven..correct..love should meld hearts and souls. .. venkat

Re: DON'T KNOW BUT (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:13:17 AM AEST
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Lovely! Trust that love will find you... it has a funny way of sneaking up on your sometimes!

SNM

Re: DON'T KNOW BUT (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 01:25:21 AM AEST
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sweet write emy girl! very pretty picture too:) hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

Re: DON'T KNOW BUT (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 03:55:19 AM AEST
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beutiful song lots of feeling and emotion I loved it...very touching!
much love,
Dani

Re: DON'T KNOW BUT (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 06:22:37 AM AEST
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Oh Emy grrlfriend....this is an awesome write..and the pic is just so beautiful....
Hugs
Jenni

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