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Array ( [sid] => 52332 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => This is for you, you know who you are [time] => 2004-06-17 03:47:39 [hometext] => [bodytext] => My eyes are swollen
My head is spinning
My mind says one thing
but my heart is winning

I cant do this anymore
I cant take the pain
Of waking up another day
Without you here again

I dont know why I still love you
When you treat me this way
Cause every bit of happiness i get
You soon will take away

I have mascara running down my face
From all the tears That I cry
But I cant turn to no one
you all turn a blind eye

You dont see whats going on in here
Whats going on or what I feel
I wake everyday
hoping this aint real

You may laugh at The way I act
You may laugh at stuff i've said
But trust me soon you wont be laughing
You wont be laughing when im dead

Watch my blood start to run cold
My eyes will cry one last time
And all because I fell in love
Which seems the biggist crime

I hope your happy when im gone
Which im sure you will be
cause then you can be with her
Without the thought of ditching me

my writting probably makes no sense
mixed up feelings start to flow
And I just wanna say goodbye
Before its time to go

I should have died years ago
the day I watched my mum die
But instead I thought about
Giving life a try

I have the pills to hand
Take them one by one
I will talk you through my actions
as each one is done

My eyes are hazy
My body is breaking
My heart is slowing
My tummy is aching

I think im drifting in and out
I feel sleepy but awake
Im just waiting patiently
For my last breath to break

I can see my mum now
She has come to take me home
To a land called heaven
Where I am free to roam

Life is really great up here
Theres lots of things to do
And the best bit about it
Is I can still see you

Im there when your sleeping
If you feel cold chills then its me
Maybe this is a better way
For me and you to be

Wait somethings happening
theres a beat my heart makes
Whats going on
Oh im awake

It was all a dream
I never really died
Well thats not compleatly true
Cause I already died inside

But this is just a taster
For the future, to look ahead
Be carefull how you treat me
Cause im serious bout being dead

You know who you are
So when your read this im sure
That you will take some notice
now you know whats instore

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 36 [informant] => lil_angel_eyes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
This is for you, you know who you are

Contributed by lil_angel_eyes on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 03:47:39 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



My eyes are swollen
My head is spinning
My mind says one thing
but my heart is winning

I cant do this anymore
I cant take the pain
Of waking up another day
Without you here again

I dont know why I still love you
When you treat me this way
Cause every bit of happiness i get
You soon will take away

I have mascara running down my face
From all the tears That I cry
But I cant turn to no one
you all turn a blind eye

You dont see whats going on in here
Whats going on or what I feel
I wake everyday
hoping this aint real

You may laugh at The way I act
You may laugh at stuff i've said
But trust me soon you wont be laughing
You wont be laughing when im dead

Watch my blood start to run cold
My eyes will cry one last time
And all because I fell in love
Which seems the biggist crime

I hope your happy when im gone
Which im sure you will be
cause then you can be with her
Without the thought of ditching me

my writting probably makes no sense
mixed up feelings start to flow
And I just wanna say goodbye
Before its time to go

I should have died years ago
the day I watched my mum die
But instead I thought about
Giving life a try

I have the pills to hand
Take them one by one
I will talk you through my actions
as each one is done

My eyes are hazy
My body is breaking
My heart is slowing
My tummy is aching

I think im drifting in and out
I feel sleepy but awake
Im just waiting patiently
For my last breath to break

I can see my mum now
She has come to take me home
To a land called heaven
Where I am free to roam

Life is really great up here
Theres lots of things to do
And the best bit about it
Is I can still see you

Im there when your sleeping
If you feel cold chills then its me
Maybe this is a better way
For me and you to be

Wait somethings happening
theres a beat my heart makes
Whats going on
Oh im awake

It was all a dream
I never really died
Well thats not compleatly true
Cause I already died inside

But this is just a taster
For the future, to look ahead
Be carefull how you treat me
Cause im serious bout being dead

You know who you are
So when your read this im sure
That you will take some notice
now you know whats instore





Copyright © lil_angel_eyes ... [ 2004-06-17 03:47:39]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: This is for you, you know who you are (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 04:25:23 AM AEST
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do you really think ending your life will ease the pain that you feel? what if you are wrong and carry this through eternity with no relief? are you willing to take that chance? no one on this earth is worth taking a life



Re: This is for you, you know who you are (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 07:26:33 AM AEST
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greatly written, very raw, no-one is worth taking your life for... you can find strength from somewhere.. keep writing

pixie xx




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