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Array ( [sid] => 52325 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The person I call...LIFE [time] => 2004-06-17 02:57:45 [hometext] => haha speaks for its self... [bodytext] => you hold me down
with cruel despite
something I'm not
able to fight
you make me cry
my thousand tears a day
all because of those things
you cause people to say
please tell me
this isnt reality
But I feel so isolated
not at all free
it's nothing I choose to be
you just wont allow
me to be me
I'll end you now
I just have to figure out how
I've tried so many times
when you got rough
made everything
for me so tough
I speak to you now
The person I call...LIFE
I'll murder you now
with my good friend knife... [comments] => 7 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Living_In_My_Dream [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
The person I call...LIFE

Contributed by Living_In_My_Dream on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 02:57:45 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



you hold me down
with cruel despite
something I'm not
able to fight
you make me cry
my thousand tears a day
all because of those things
you cause people to say
please tell me
this isnt reality
But I feel so isolated
not at all free
it's nothing I choose to be
you just wont allow
me to be me
I'll end you now
I just have to figure out how
I've tried so many times
when you got rough
made everything
for me so tough
I speak to you now
The person I call...LIFE
I'll murder you now
with my good friend knife...




Copyright © Living_In_My_Dream ... [ 2004-06-17 02:57:45]
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Re: The person I call...LIFE (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 07:22:07 AM AEST
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very dark , great write

pixie xx


Re: The person I call...LIFE (User Rating: 1 )
by hannahbanana on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 02:07:05 PM AEST
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very powerful write. i really liked this. very strong ppoem. thank you for your kind comments. i will definitely keep up with your posts. excellent*


Re: The person I call...LIFE (User Rating: 1 )
by deadbloodyrose on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 03:41:09 PM AEST
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i like this one too.. it has a lot of emotion in it.. AMI JO


Re: The person I call...LIFE (User Rating: 1 )
by JT on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 09:19:19 PM AEST
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strong write. the words flow easily and emotions wash through your writing. great stuff.
-jt-


Re: The person I call...LIFE (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 01:24:28 AM AEST
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please tell me
this isnt reality
But I feel so isolated
not at all free-- this is how I feel right now. great poem , deep emotions. I as always relate well with you here. A++++ well done


Re: The person I call...LIFE (User Rating: 1 )
by PunkRocker494 on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 01:36:13 PM AEST
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This one is kinda funny. I'd like to do the same thing to my person. Very interesting. I love all of your work so far. Keep them coming.


Re: The person I call...LIFE (User Rating: 1 )
by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 07:47:36 PM AEST
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Life is harsh. :-( PLEASE dont ever surender. If you need to talk, PM me.

Lindsey

PS. The poem was awesome.




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