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Array ( [sid] => 52304 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Kill the World [time] => 2004-06-16 23:17:42 [hometext] => This piece is not meant to offend; it is just the way i view things at this point in time. I hope you can respect my opinion as I am willing to respect yours. Some things never change, and some things do... [bodytext] => Kill the World

I have no love for Christ
There is nothing holy
The world that surrounds me
Is nothing but a waste

I have no love for God
Created life in His image
He is perfect
And His creation isn't

I have no love for the Trinity
It's pure hypocrisy

Lies written down to deceive
Lies are to be believed
And truth is to be denied
That is the way of things

You think a loving God
Takes life away
When it never breathed
That a loving God
Damns you for living
Living is a sin in his eyes
And morality can't override
What is destined to be
Destined for eternity
In the flames you created

God exists behind a facade
Lies written to deceive us
Satan's used to show
How holy He is up above
Is he any better?
God is charged with murder

Are you too blind to see
The hypocrisy of it all?
They made words to fit
How the world is
To give you hope
To give you faith
To give you nothing
To give you what you wanted
That is all they ever told you
What you ever wanted
This was used to control you

I have no love for You
When you are to kill the world [comments] => 9 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 13 [informant] => essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Kill the World

Contributed by essentially9 on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 11:17:42 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Kill the World

I have no love for Christ
There is nothing holy
The world that surrounds me
Is nothing but a waste

I have no love for God
Created life in His image
He is perfect
And His creation isn't

I have no love for the Trinity
It's pure hypocrisy

Lies written down to deceive
Lies are to be believed
And truth is to be denied
That is the way of things

You think a loving God
Takes life away
When it never breathed
That a loving God
Damns you for living
Living is a sin in his eyes
And morality can't override
What is destined to be
Destined for eternity
In the flames you created

God exists behind a facade
Lies written to deceive us
Satan's used to show
How holy He is up above
Is he any better?
God is charged with murder

Are you too blind to see
The hypocrisy of it all?
They made words to fit
How the world is
To give you hope
To give you faith
To give you nothing
To give you what you wanted
That is all they ever told you
What you ever wanted
This was used to control you

I have no love for You
When you are to kill the world

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Re: Kill the World (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 11:21:58 PM AEST
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Strong emotions stated here. I don't agree with your philosophy but I do like the way you stated your opinion. Very good work.

Rita

Re: Kill the World (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 01:06:47 AM AEST
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very well written
michelle

Re: Kill the World (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 02:52:45 AM AEST
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ahhh this is great!!! so strong. I can agree with you and relate to this piece. very well done A++++

Re: Kill the World (User Rating: 1 )
by brigitte7735 on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 03:09:55 AM AEST
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Created life in His image
He is perfect
And His creation isn't

I still tend to be religious but this is the one thing i could never wrap my mind around. I am really loving this fearless direction you have beent taking.

Vanessa ( 090404 )

Re: Kill the World (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 03:52:05 AM AEST
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I considered writing something along these lines, but I rescinded the composition because I would have sounded confused and misdirected.

You expressed yourself clearly here, with powerful feeling. Although I don't entirely agree with you, I understand how ridiculous the notion of a loving creator must seem to some whom find no joy or hope in their lives.

Compelling write.

Re: Kill the World (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 07:14:03 AM AEST
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good work, very powerful words,

pixie xx

Re: Kill the World (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 12:46:52 PM AEST
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i understand exactly what you're saying, you expressed yourself so well. a very bold and brave statement and very well written. i love to hear people speak their minds without sugar coating it... great job! *

Re: Kill the World (User Rating: 1 )
by Dereku on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 08:22:37 PM AEST
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I'm glad you're expressing yourself, but I don't agree with you at all. I can't say too much since I don't know you, but can you sit there and say that, going on someone elses comments, you wrote this because you have no joy in your life?
Even those who are so depressed and those who hate life find joy every so often. Even if the unhappiness outweighs the happiness, people can still find joy. It's up to us to go out and find that joy, or wallow in your unhappiness as it seems you are trying to do in your write.
Once again, I'm glad you're expressing yourself, but I don't agree with you.

Re: Kill the World (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 5th November 2014 @ 10:45:42 AM AEST
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I get the feelings behind this one...Thumbs up for putting it out there. Very emotive.

~Scorp

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