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Array ( [sid] => 52297 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => An Ending to Every Beginning [time] => 2004-06-16 22:55:58 [hometext] => the title has a certain extent to the poem, but not a very big one i guess, i couldnt think of a title so its the first thing i came up with. [bodytext] => Beautiful death,
wonderful ending,
Complete for the
miserable beginning.
A painful bite out of life
ended my chance
for happiness.
Not that i needed it anyways!
I cut myself so many times,
feeling no such regret,
still dont,
and im dead.
I've tried to be open,
to satisfy everyone,
but none cared.
So i had to end this
death sentencing Nightmare! [comments] => 1 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 13 [informant] => srugglingyoungster [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

An Ending to Every Beginning

Contributed by srugglingyoungster on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 10:55:58 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Beautiful death,
wonderful ending,
Complete for the
miserable beginning.
A painful bite out of life
ended my chance
for happiness.
Not that i needed it anyways!
I cut myself so many times,
feeling no such regret,
still dont,
and im dead.
I've tried to be open,
to satisfy everyone,
but none cared.
So i had to end this
death sentencing Nightmare!

Copyright © srugglingyoungster ... [ 2004-06-16 22:55:58]
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Re: An Ending to Every Beginning (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 05:31:57 AM AEST
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wow,
i like this one cuz it was,
in a way,
thought-provoking...
to me, the poem had a sorta rushed effect,
which, if you intended it for the reader to have the impression that you decided this in a fleeting moment, then you've done it perfectly here,
and if not, you might want to work on making it a bit more detailed with a slower pace too,
so that maybe we could further fully understand the situation...
but maybe i'm wrong so who knows?
that's just what i think...
but other than that, again, i loved the flow,
and also it was short and quite to the point, which is good since i don't particularly favour redundancy...
great work!
keep 'em coming !!!
_.:'~Katie~':._

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