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Array ( [sid] => 52275 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => TaKe HeR HoMe [time] => 2004-06-16 20:56:59 [hometext] => Just something I wrote today thinking about the one that got away. :-D [bodytext] => Isolated occassion
Quiet invasion
She hoped for a prayer
That could take her there,
~To Take Her Home~

Contemplated suicide
Loneliness in struggling pride
She watched them fall apart
Learned to trust her heart,
~To Take Her Home~

Unimaginable existance
Spiteful resistance
She wished to see the light
That gave way to night,
~To Take Her Home~

Quiet desperation
Hidden asperation
She found what she was looking for
Taught herself to value more,
~To Take Her Home~

He promised her happiness
She went weak with this last kiss
Forever broke her heart
Forever tore her apart,
~And he dropped her off at home~ [comments] => 6 [counter] => 211 [topic] => 22 [informant] => strange_lindsey [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

TaKe HeR HoMe

Contributed by strange_lindsey on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 08:56:59 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Isolated occassion
Quiet invasion
She hoped for a prayer
That could take her there,
~To Take Her Home~

Contemplated suicide
Loneliness in struggling pride
She watched them fall apart
Learned to trust her heart,
~To Take Her Home~

Unimaginable existance
Spiteful resistance
She wished to see the light
That gave way to night,
~To Take Her Home~

Quiet desperation
Hidden asperation
She found what she was looking for
Taught herself to value more,
~To Take Her Home~

He promised her happiness
She went weak with this last kiss
Forever broke her heart
Forever tore her apart,
~And he dropped her off at home~

Copyright © strange_lindsey ... [ 2004-06-16 20:56:59]
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Re: TaKe HeR HoMe (User Rating: 1 )
by Princesaazul16 on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 09:06:23 PM AEST
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Beautiful!! So strong and deep..I loved it! Keep up the good work! Hope to hear more!

~Stace~

Re: TaKe HeR HoMe (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 09:52:49 PM AEST
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so well written, but sooo sad, this poem tugged at my heart....... hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

Re: TaKe HeR HoMe (User Rating: 1 )
by brigitte7735 on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 10:19:07 PM AEST
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This is sensationally heartbreaking and so dripping with originality

Always,
Vanessa ( 090404 )

Re: TaKe HeR HoMe (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 03:57:01 AM AEST
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I like the repetition of the title here, Lindsey. This was full of melancholy, but showed a great deal of talent, too.

Keep on writing.

Re: TaKe HeR HoMe (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 06:27:17 AM AEST
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very well written, great write

pixie xx

Re: TaKe HeR HoMe (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 05:25:29 PM AEST
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I liked this, original in its format
and tragic

PFR

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