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Array ( [sid] => 52272 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Journal [time] => 2004-06-16 20:30:53 [hometext] => I just read my journal, so this poem was inspired by it. The titles a give away too! :) [bodytext] => Reading through my journal late at night
Something about my life just doesn't seem right
It seems like I'm never truthfully happy
I know this is not how I want life to be

The journal doesn't lie, I'm afraid
It tells of my mother's secret room raid
How can I be happy when my mom doesn't trust me
She sees someone who's not me

Such sad stories it does tell
Living in this distorted hell
Mother always yelling
When will I be strong and start rebelling

Degrading words written down, mixed with tears
What could I have possibly done so wrong in fourteen years
I feel like I just need a new life
I'll dismiss this one with a slash of a knife [comments] => 3 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Colleen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Journal

Contributed by Colleen on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 08:30:53 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Reading through my journal late at night
Something about my life just doesn't seem right
It seems like I'm never truthfully happy
I know this is not how I want life to be

The journal doesn't lie, I'm afraid
It tells of my mother's secret room raid
How can I be happy when my mom doesn't trust me
She sees someone who's not me

Such sad stories it does tell
Living in this distorted hell
Mother always yelling
When will I be strong and start rebelling

Degrading words written down, mixed with tears
What could I have possibly done so wrong in fourteen years
I feel like I just need a new life
I'll dismiss this one with a slash of a knife




Copyright © Colleen ... [ 2004-06-16 20:30:53]
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Re: Journal (User Rating: 1 )
by Esther on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 08:40:15 PM AEST
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great write i dont keep a diary but i can totally relate. life always seems soo bad-but if we really took the time to look we'd see that there's also toons of goodness
good luck in life
-esther


Re: Journal (User Rating: 1 )
by InnerBeautyQueen on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 08:54:52 PM AEST
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very good poem


Re: Journal (User Rating: 1 )
by TheVoice on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 09:39:31 PM AEST
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colleen,
super write. look deeper before you blame yourself. hang in there my friend. lean on your friends for your extra stregnth. we are here for you.........

hugs,
the voice




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