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Array ( [sid] => 52262 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A New Mourning [time] => 2004-06-16 19:28:59 [hometext] => First post in a long time, Hope I havent lost my touch.... [bodytext] => The sun fades into the shallow bay.
Our hopes and dreams drown with it.
The moon looms over the mountins peak.
Its slient soft rays beam on what once was.
A fable a tale of hope.
A tall tale a small tale.
A hope for a new begining.
For all that was lost will weave back again.
Back to an age of man quite forgotten.
The old tales will be retold.
The land will take all the glory.
We will reep what we grow.
For this is the end.
The end of all things we know.
A new faith.
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A New Mourning

Contributed by Mortis-Dark on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 07:28:59 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The sun fades into the shallow bay.
Our hopes and dreams drown with it.
The moon looms over the mountins peak.
Its slient soft rays beam on what once was.
A fable a tale of hope.
A tall tale a small tale.
A hope for a new begining.
For all that was lost will weave back again.
Back to an age of man quite forgotten.
The old tales will be retold.
The land will take all the glory.
We will reep what we grow.
For this is the end.
The end of all things we know.
A new faith.
A New Mourning.

Copyright © Mortis-Dark ... [ 2004-06-16 19:28:59]
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Re: A New Mourning (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 07:49:34 PM AEST
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interesting, glad to see you posting again too! hugs n' love nessa

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Re: A New Mourning (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 08:24:45 PM AEST
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beautiful and very touching... great write!*

Re: A New Mourning (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 10:01:09 PM AEST
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nice write, sadness, drips from this fable, liked it, keep on writing

Re: A New Mourning (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 06:21:57 AM AEST
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by the looks of things you haven't lost your touch this was great,

pixie xx

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