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Array ( [sid] => 52252 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Winter's Blanket [time] => 2004-06-16 17:55:36 [hometext] => Feel Free to Comment. Also, this poem is just a bunch of my thoughts and feelings, so it doen't really look like a poem, even though it is. [bodytext] => The Winter storm last night, that made the moon shine bright, spread a blanket that streathed across the country.
It wasn't the kind of blanket you would sleep on, but dreams filled my ming with wonder.
The blanket is Winter's blanket, filling the world with soft, white, glistning snow.
And we run around and draw out a drawing on the blanket, a message that says
Spring is coming. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 194 [topic] => 27 [informant] => TheNextRobertFrost [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => NaturePoetry )
Winter's Blanket

Contributed by TheNextRobertFrost on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 05:55:36 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry



The Winter storm last night, that made the moon shine bright, spread a blanket that streathed across the country.
It wasn't the kind of blanket you would sleep on, but dreams filled my ming with wonder.
The blanket is Winter's blanket, filling the world with soft, white, glistning snow.
And we run around and draw out a drawing on the blanket, a message that says
Spring is coming.




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Re: Winter's Blanket (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 07:11:33 PM AEST
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Hmn. Unfortunate typos aside (I hope you meant 'mind') I found this interesting enough to let you know that I think you should substitute the 'we', unless it is more directly asserted elsewhere in your work, for 'she', as in the ambiguous lady of nature, or Spring's Caress.

Just a suggestion. Thanks.


Re: Winter's Blanket (User Rating: 1 )
by TheNextRobertFrost on Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 07:18:55 PM AEST
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sorry for these unfortunate typos. shame we cant edit our poetry if were general members but i suppose that typos are mistakes sorry!
TB




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