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Array ( [sid] => 52218 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Thank You [time] => 2004-06-16 14:06:12 [hometext] => To a friend who really cared.....Thanks Aj.......... [bodytext] => You won't let me be
You say I must talk
Vent all my anger
My pain and my thoughts
But I don't really want to
I don't want your pity
You don't understand
It makes me feel guilty
My pain on you mind
My life in your thoughts
All because you were noble
Now you're distraught

Why does it bother you;
That I want my life to end?
Why do you care?
Are you that good of friend?
Are you really that valliant?
You do seem to care
You would brave my anger
To stop my dispair
This deed is so kind
A message you send
I know you won't give up
You'll make sure my pain ends

Thank You [comments] => 2 [counter] => 586 [topic] => 37 [informant] => Kie-Kie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ThankYouPoems )

Thank You

Contributed by Kie-Kie on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 02:06:12 PM in AEST
Topic: ThankYouPoems

You won't let me be
You say I must talk
Vent all my anger
My pain and my thoughts
But I don't really want to
I don't want your pity
You don't understand
It makes me feel guilty
My pain on you mind
My life in your thoughts
All because you were noble
Now you're distraught

Why does it bother you;
That I want my life to end?
Why do you care?
Are you that good of friend?
Are you really that valliant?
You do seem to care
You would brave my anger
To stop my dispair
This deed is so kind
A message you send
I know you won't give up
You'll make sure my pain ends

Thank You

Copyright © Kie-Kie ... [ 2004-06-16 14:06:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Thank You (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 02:27:11 PM AEST
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yes he is that good of a friend...and for me boyfriend also....if me and him were to ever break up I think that we will remain best friends...because he is just a really special person...and Im glad to hear he was there for you...sorry I couldnt have been I diddnt know you all that well...but Im here now...and yeah Im glad he was there then because you are still here and I wouldnt have befriended you and me and you been such good friends...so Im happy to hear you are still aliive and well...keep going strong...
much love,
Dani
by the way that was an awesome poem great wording I loved it...keep it up!!!

Re: Thank You (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 11:59:18 PM AEST
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great write yet again lol all of ur writes are great wish i had a great friend maybe we can be great friends lol

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