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Array ( [sid] => 52213 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => No Face/ 49 Days [time] => 2004-06-16 13:08:48 [hometext] => There are two poems here, Read with caution [bodytext] => My soul's in my Stomach
It's like Butterflies
But a little different
I wounder why
I feel like an infant
Not even three days Old
From what I Know

I am stuct somewhere else
Hiden back on the self
My soul falls unheard
When I feel like some one else
I wonder what I've heard
And falling into space
Telling words to no face

_____________________

49 days

49 days
Thru the Bardo
Never saw a clear light
Came back as an owl
Don't believe they're so smart
Never knew how many
Licks to the center of a lolly pop

I cut off my ear
And sent it to a W****
I died
and came back a s***
Crossing the street my gap
It struts
Picking up bills for what I suck
Died a nasty death
49 days I could not rest
I came back a daughter
That was pleasant
But died an early servant
Then came back a writter
Serverly confused
Thinking about the illusion
wondering what's it to you [comments] => 2 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 39 [informant] => rhei76 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
No Face 49 Days

Contributed by rhei76 on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 01:08:48 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief



My soul's in my Stomach
It's like Butterflies
But a little different
I wounder why
I feel like an infant
Not even three days Old
From what I Know

I am stuct somewhere else
Hiden back on the self
My soul falls unheard
When I feel like some one else
I wonder what I've heard
And falling into space
Telling words to no face

_____________________

49 days

49 days
Thru the Bardo
Never saw a clear light
Came back as an owl
Don't believe they're so smart
Never knew how many
Licks to the center of a lolly pop

I cut off my ear
And sent it to a W****
I died
and came back a s***
Crossing the street my gap
It struts
Picking up bills for what I suck
Died a nasty death
49 days I could not rest
I came back a daughter
That was pleasant
But died an early servant
Then came back a writter
Serverly confused
Thinking about the illusion
wondering what's it to you




Copyright © rhei76 ... [ 2004-06-16 13:08:48]
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Re: No Face 49 Days (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 01:20:34 PM AEST
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both great., as always :)

pixie xx


Re: No Face 49 Days (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 01:51:21 PM AEST
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Deep, melancholy, slightly dark with an edge that bites you at the end.

Combined to eclipse so many thoughts and very strongly stated.

Loved this one!





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