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HAIL
HAIL
Hell
I want to
Feel
Heal
Kill sensations that show I'm real
I want to
Hail
Heal
Feel the light of a better day
Thru this darkend soul
And grow the will on the way
To release control
I want to
Feel so far out of this side
Give up on doubt
Stay alive til I have died
To see what it was about
I want to
Heal
Feel the pain from a new place
Feel all things may never lay to waist
I want to
Know before I
Go
I want to
Show
I want to
Learn & feel me grow
I want to
Go once I
Know

I want to
Be
Then come back to
See
It's not all there
What it meant to
Me [comments] => 4 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 43 [informant] => rhei76 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

For The Feel Of Me

Contributed by rhei76 on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 07:50:30 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I WANT TO
HAIL
HAIL
Hell
I want to
Feel
Heal
Kill sensations that show I'm real
I want to
Hail
Heal
Feel the light of a better day
Thru this darkend soul
And grow the will on the way
To release control
I want to
Feel so far out of this side
Give up on doubt
Stay alive til I have died
To see what it was about
I want to
Heal
Feel the pain from a new place
Feel all things may never lay to waist
I want to
Know before I
Go
I want to
Show
I want to
Learn & feel me grow
I want to
Go once I
Know

I want to
Be
Then come back to
See
It's not all there
What it meant to
Me

Copyright © rhei76 ... [ 2004-06-16 07:50:30]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: For The Feel Of Me (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 07:53:49 AM AEST
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great poem,

pixie xx

Re: For The Feel Of Me (User Rating: 1 )
by fairy-of-ice on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 01:02:29 PM AEST
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wow, this is the best poem i have read in a long time! i love ''i want to hail hell i want to feel heal'' i can relate. such amazing writing!

Re: For The Feel Of Me (User Rating: 1 )
by luckycharm on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 05:14:08 PM AEST
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This was a good poem. Keep up the good work and you are a very good writer!.-luckycharm.

Re: For The Feel Of Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Justalady on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 06:59:35 PM AEST
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Talking to one's self can reveal many things. Truth is hard to write, much less relay to someone else. You've done a great job of just that. June

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