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Array ( [sid] => 52183 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => hmMMm?... gurl! .... [time] => 2004-06-16 06:48:47 [hometext] => umm it's hard to explain ... it's a love hate relationship ... i dont know if she's being true n real wid me .... yah feel meh? n she's wid someone else now but she says im da one she loves .... hmmm confusin' lol =P hahaha [bodytext] => i feel so lost in the night
without you by my side
damn! your lovin feel so right
though at times it makes me wanna hide

i miss you ...
and the way you make me feel
i long to hold you
but gurl you gotta keep it real ...

people say your a mistake
but what do they know
there'll be hell to pay though if ur jus a fake
gurl believe me you'll feel my blow ...

i know ur wid someone else rite now
and i think it's for da best
coz peeps will start hatin' on you, yah know
shoot! i really need to rest ... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 214 [topic] => 2 [informant] => abie05 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
hmMMm?... gurl! ....

Contributed by abie05 on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 06:48:47 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



i feel so lost in the night
without you by my side
damn! your lovin feel so right
though at times it makes me wanna hide

i miss you ...
and the way you make me feel
i long to hold you
but gurl you gotta keep it real ...

people say your a mistake
but what do they know
there'll be hell to pay though if ur jus a fake
gurl believe me you'll feel my blow ...

i know ur wid someone else rite now
and i think it's for da best
coz peeps will start hatin' on you, yah know
shoot! i really need to rest ...




Copyright © abie05 ... [ 2004-06-16 06:48:47]
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Re: hmMMm?... gurl! .... (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 06:59:18 AM AEST
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awww this is so sad, good poem, thanks for sharing

pixie xx


Re: hmMMm?... gurl! .... (User Rating: 1 )
by AzurePaladin on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 01:58:18 PM AEST
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Beautiful, sad poem. That sounds like a difficult situation... Love definitely is a very confusing thing. Just hang in there...

The spacing on the poem works very well... and I like the emphasis using bold font. Good job!

Erin




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