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Array ( [sid] => 52139 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A world in my head [time] => 2004-06-15 21:21:47 [hometext] => Don’t get lost. It’s crazy in there. [bodytext] => Come into my world my dears
Where we are free to shed our fears

We can laugh & run & even fly
With many flavored water falls & multicolored sky

Where all the ground feels like a fluffy mattress
& bad things can never find our address

Where time seems to slow when were having fun
& no one is tired when the day is done

The party really starts with the going of the light
The most wondrous creatures come out in the electric blue night

Will laugh & sing & dance around
& talk with the new strange friends we’ve found

Everyone has a place inside
So that from reality they can hide

Where fantastic melodies ring through our ears
& jokes from purple trees will make us laugh to tears

Thank you for joining me through mine
maybe will go to your place next time
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 212 [topic] => 40 [informant] => WereCat [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )
A world in my head

Contributed by WereCat on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 09:21:47 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy



Come into my world my dears
Where we are free to shed our fears

We can laugh & run & even fly
With many flavored water falls & multicolored sky

Where all the ground feels like a fluffy mattress
& bad things can never find our address

Where time seems to slow when were having fun
& no one is tired when the day is done

The party really starts with the going of the light
The most wondrous creatures come out in the electric blue night

Will laugh & sing & dance around
& talk with the new strange friends we’ve found

Everyone has a place inside
So that from reality they can hide

Where fantastic melodies ring through our ears
& jokes from purple trees will make us laugh to tears

Thank you for joining me through mine
maybe will go to your place next time




Copyright © WereCat ... [ 2004-06-15 21:21:47]
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Re: A world in my head (User Rating: 1 )
by Dusty on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 09:33:18 PM AEST
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YAY! I love this poem. It's a great happy write.


Re: A world in my head (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 09:57:27 PM AEST
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great images and such a pleasantly happy poem:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: A world in my head (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 06:12:50 AM AEST
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wow great poem,

keep em coming

pixie xx


Re: A world in my head (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 05:28:39 PM AEST
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What if I want to get lost in there????

Great poem!! I quite enjoyed it, left me with a smile on my face...

Jaime


Re: A world in my head (User Rating: 1 )
by Dreama on Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 10:09:38 PM AEST
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yes! very good! I love your world! amazing how words convey great imagery! keep it up!
Pete x




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