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[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => It's All Your Fault
[time] => 2004-06-15 16:48:18
[hometext] => yes, this actually happened... its about rape
[bodytext] => the blood rolls down my body,
warm and red
knowing when you climb on top,
inside I'll be dead
you drag me away to my secret hell,
as the fire burns my skin
you make me wish that I was dead,
as the razor makes it's sin
you drag me off into your room,
as you slowly begin to penetrate
your body is to strong for me to move,
as I lay and die
your head is filled with nasty thoughts,
of me in your cluches
when you're done you begin to hit,
and caress me with more touches
I hate you for what you have done,
only you can make me want to die
but now I have to nurse my wounds,
as I sit in my endless cry
[comments] => 9
[counter] => 212
[topic] => 36
[informant] => screwup
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 10
[ratings] => 2
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => Suicide
)
It's All Your Fault
Contributed by
screwup
on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 04:48:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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the blood rolls down my body,
warm and red
knowing when you climb on top,
inside I'll be dead
you drag me away to my secret hell,
as the fire burns my skin
you make me wish that I was dead,
as the razor makes it's sin
you drag me off into your room,
as you slowly begin to penetrate
your body is to strong for me to move,
as I lay and die
your head is filled with nasty thoughts,
of me in your cluches
when you're done you begin to hit,
and caress me with more touches
I hate you for what you have done,
only you can make me want to die
but now I have to nurse my wounds,
as I sit in my endless cry
Copyright ©
screwup
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2004-06-15 16:48:18]
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Re: It's All Your Fault
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by waos on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 05:28:59 PM AEST
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that's a good poem.
but what it says...i just want to hide you inside a safe room where you can be happy. *HUGS* |
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Re: It's All Your Fault
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by slackoffsamiam on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 06:05:16 PM AEST
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| I truly feel for you and hope you can get past this |
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Re: It's All Your Fault
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by jmt25607 on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 06:27:32 PM AEST
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| i know what you feel the same happen to me when i was 9 and i hope you can get past it like i still hope to do now i got help i found my self a better guy who treats me like a queen but at night i still think of what happen and cry am 17now and i still havent compleetly got over it i get close but i see the person who did this to me everydayalmost so i hope you get over it and if you message me and tell me how and if i ever find out i will do the came great writeing . sorry so long ps i hope this helps you noing other people go though the same thing and your not alone cause it dose me a lil |
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Re: It's All Your Fault
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 05:38:28 AM AEST
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awww this is trully awful......(((((HUGS)))))
Thanks for being brave and sharing this with us all
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: It's All Your Fault
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 01:27:08 PM AEST
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| OMG!!!!! I'm so sorry you had to go through that... I can't imagine... You poem was really good though. |
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Re: It's All Your Fault
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 07:10:43 AM AEST
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Rape is a hideous crime, it sickens me to be called a man sometimes, when I think of what other men seem to be capable of
It isn't just the scars and the pain on the outside.....its the longterm scars and the pain on the inside.
Sorry for the suffering
steve |
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Re: It's All Your Fault
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 12:57:07 PM AEST
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| I Am Sorry This Happen To You But You're Not Alone It Happen To Me. I Was 12 Though And I Still Think About It. I Would Love To Run Into Him And Ask Him Why What Did I Do? I Never Told Anyone Only A Year Later And That Was My Mom And Some Friends. I Would Love To Tell My Brothers But I Am Scared What They Would Think. I Want My Dad To Know But I Don't Want To Put Him Down |
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Re: It's All Your Fault
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by deathdrop on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 04:12:30 AM AEST
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man, this one made me cry!
this is a very powerful poem!
not that it's nice what happened to you! but iut's truly a powerful write!
no words can even describe what ithink of that person! ... and for you i am so deeply sorry!
i'll read your other poems...
but in the mean time keep your chin up!
it'll be alright in the end, if you keep on trying! |
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Re: It's All Your Fault
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by xemptydecemberx on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 03:48:42 PM AEST
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| that is a really good poem.. yeah.. i can definitly relate...never really told anyone tho...1 person..but yeah..good poem.. |
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