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Array ( [sid] => 52092 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => after work [time] => 2004-06-15 14:58:21 [hometext] => [bodytext] => inside your room there's this bed for two
i'm usually content
with just ur arms around me
but tonight i want us to get ridiculously dirty

i imagine us to be naughty
tonight in every way we can be
i want my hair all over the place
and i want us all sweaty
i'm gonna kiss all over your body
and i wanna hear that stutter breathing...

up against the wall then take me to the floor
STOP! REPEAT! pleasure me once more!
i'm tastin all of you hopin we can play this in rewind
fast forward to me right up against the door

you take my breath away bending me backwards
bittin my lips, kissin my hips
makin sure i'm enjoyin it and baby i'm lovin it
you know i'm lovin it, i'm always lovin it

take off your shirt and lay that silky soft skin
on the bed and let me begin to mesermize you
i pull down your pants kissin your thighs
and watchin your eyes follow what my hands do

my tongue goes crazy on you baby
STOP! REPEAT! pleasure you once more!
i'm tastin all of you hopin we can play this in rewind
fast forward to me completely blowin ya mind

i'm dyin to make you scream
i wanna get you to do the things
we see on X-rated videos
you don't even gotta start slow
it's ok if you hurt me i don't break easily

i'm suckin on your finger tips
as you're kissin on my lips
jus relax i know it's been a long day
but this is how it ends
me relaxin you in every way.... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 226 [topic] => 40 [informant] => taintedorange21 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )
after work

Contributed by taintedorange21 on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 02:58:21 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy



inside your room there's this bed for two
i'm usually content
with just ur arms around me
but tonight i want us to get ridiculously dirty

i imagine us to be naughty
tonight in every way we can be
i want my hair all over the place
and i want us all sweaty
i'm gonna kiss all over your body
and i wanna hear that stutter breathing...

up against the wall then take me to the floor
STOP! REPEAT! pleasure me once more!
i'm tastin all of you hopin we can play this in rewind
fast forward to me right up against the door

you take my breath away bending me backwards
bittin my lips, kissin my hips
makin sure i'm enjoyin it and baby i'm lovin it
you know i'm lovin it, i'm always lovin it

take off your shirt and lay that silky soft skin
on the bed and let me begin to mesermize you
i pull down your pants kissin your thighs
and watchin your eyes follow what my hands do

my tongue goes crazy on you baby
STOP! REPEAT! pleasure you once more!
i'm tastin all of you hopin we can play this in rewind
fast forward to me completely blowin ya mind

i'm dyin to make you scream
i wanna get you to do the things
we see on X-rated videos
you don't even gotta start slow
it's ok if you hurt me i don't break easily

i'm suckin on your finger tips
as you're kissin on my lips
jus relax i know it's been a long day
but this is how it ends
me relaxin you in every way....




Copyright © taintedorange21 ... [ 2004-06-15 14:58:21]
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Re: after work (User Rating: 1 )
by Dusty on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 07:50:15 PM AEST
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I think this poem is terribly interesting...lreally liking it.


Re: after work (User Rating: 1 )
by WereCat on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 09:00:53 PM AEST
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Tantalizing. I like. The rewind and fast forward part is really cool.




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