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A Color I've Grown Fond Of
Contributed by
liquidsunshine
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Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 11:47:55 AM in AEST
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A color I've grown fond of
On the bluish side of green
It sparkles without glitter
And it's equal I've not seen
It’s soft and kind and gentle
And it always makes me smile
Although it makes me blush sometimes
I'll watch it for a while
One time it looked all watery
And took on a stony look
But that time was long ago
When a great thing I'd mistook
A color I've grown fond of
Is a cross with foamy sea
A bit of Borealis
And a lot of love for me
Yes much like the green Auroras
Its excited from within
Wow that color! It's amazing
And I'll never know its twin
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liquidsunshine
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2004-06-15 11:47:55]
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Re: A Color I've Grown Fond Of
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 11:53:31 AM AEST
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| thats someones eyes....hazel eyes i would guess..cuz hazels do weird stuff.....and i dunno..yeah....am i right? |
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Re: A Color I've Grown Fond Of
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by liquidsunshine on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 11:56:25 AM AEST
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| It IS someone's eyes, but they're not hazel... they're "on the bluish side of green". |
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Re: A Color I've Grown Fond Of
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 12:31:09 PM AEST
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i know its not right, but some kind of stone or precious gem? hehe do tell, dont leave me wonderin' lol, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: A Color I've Grown Fond Of
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 06:59:52 PM AEST
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I thought when I read it that it had to be the eyes of someone you care deeply for, especially when you said 'blush.' You penned this piece beautifully. What a beautiful color.
Rita |
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Re: A Color I've Grown Fond Of
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by brigitte7735 on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 10:00:41 PM AEST
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Im going with tealle ( teel... sic no idea )
Just cuz i like it
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Re: A Color I've Grown Fond Of
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by eatfresh22 on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 04:42:13 PM AEST
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Chelsea, that is beautiful. I'm so proud of you. I admire the way you look at nature (or a beloved) and the way you seem to find beauty with this world which can often wear such a dark mask. You are quite the inspiring girl....
~Carrie~ |
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