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Array ( [sid] => 52010 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I cant live without.... [time] => 2004-06-15 05:26:46 [hometext] => Basically a summary of my addiction too pain killers... I know its long but Please comment!!! [bodytext] => Long nights in bed
Thinking of you
Of the times we shared
Of me and you

It first took 2
Thats all it took
I felt like god
I Love you

Days went on
You made me feel great
Two wasnt enough
It bumped up too four

He brings me six
I quickly pop
Its so much better
Ive missed out

We ran out
I cant take this
Where did you go
My lovely you
I starve for you
I still love you

As I visit my grandma
My head starts too hurt
I seek for help
Three full bottles
I think im in love
Eight for day
Six for night
Im still in love

Its now been 6 months
Since I last poped
I cant remember my sophmore life
Without you

I hate you now
For ive ***** my life
Ive lost so much
And hurt myself

Many are are surprised
That I still walk this earth
After one long night

Ive used you for so much
For happiness it brought
To end you did not

Aspirin Motrin
Its still a pill
For a heart filled hate
That will always last


[comments] => 3 [counter] => 235 [topic] => 66 [informant] => heartfilledblood [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => drugabuse )
I cant live without....

Contributed by heartfilledblood on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 05:26:46 AM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse



Long nights in bed
Thinking of you
Of the times we shared
Of me and you

It first took 2
Thats all it took
I felt like god
I Love you

Days went on
You made me feel great
Two wasnt enough
It bumped up too four

He brings me six
I quickly pop
Its so much better
Ive missed out

We ran out
I cant take this
Where did you go
My lovely you
I starve for you
I still love you

As I visit my grandma
My head starts too hurt
I seek for help
Three full bottles
I think im in love
Eight for day
Six for night
Im still in love

Its now been 6 months
Since I last poped
I cant remember my sophmore life
Without you

I hate you now
For ive ***** my life
Ive lost so much
And hurt myself

Many are are surprised
That I still walk this earth
After one long night

Ive used you for so much
For happiness it brought
To end you did not

Aspirin Motrin
Its still a pill
For a heart filled hate
That will always last






Copyright © heartfilledblood ... [ 2004-06-15 05:26:46]
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Re: I cant live without.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 05:38:20 AM AEST
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i really like this poem...
I love the way it flows really smoothly and it's really clear and everything and i can just see the way the pills were increased everyday...
wow, i never knew you could get addicted to pain-killers...
but hey, what's a 13 year old know anywayz??
lol, now i've found out it's possible...
anyway, i really like this poem, it portrays the message really vividly and stuff...
I loved it!
Keep it up!
Katie


Re: I cant live without.... (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 12:04:04 PM AEST
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great poem, very intresting,

pixie xx


Re: I cant live without.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 12:58:56 PM AEST
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I never feel any effect of pain killers
Obviously when i have a physical pain
it goes after 30 mins but, if i was to take them
for depression, nothing would happen





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