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softly
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 11:50:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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something in my soul so distant
an aching emptiness in this mortal remain
echoing solitude's reflective domain
longing in darkening hours insistent
flickering half grasped concepts beyond
dwell in depths defying exploration
a pool of nightime at which i stare
a tough loneliness ever resistant
wary thoughts fear creaks of despair
tread softly now in heartbeat's shadow
through this bleak i see so clear
tread softly spirit sense allow and follow
tightheld feelings of meaningful endear
whisperings linger of all things hallow...
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ladyfawn
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Re: softly
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 12:04:11 AM AEST
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Awesomely creative.
Verry good writing.
luv, huggs,
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Re: softly
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 12:09:20 AM AEST
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Reflects well of your pensive mood poetically
and gracefully ..tender touch of spiritual light ..softly and beautifully rhymed..best of luck and hugs..
venkat |
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Re: softly
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 12:29:46 AM AEST
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Ohhhhhhhh Nessa
this touched me down deep so serene peaceful yet kind of sad I hope this night finds you well my friend
michelle |
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Re: softly
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by Joker17 on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 04:28:40 AM AEST
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I love the picture you painted. It was poetically deep, and meaningful. Really well done. I hope to read more like this one. Can't say enough, very serene...
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Re: softly
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 05:16:16 AM AEST
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Soft, thoughtful, and oh so Ladyfawn.
Beautiful Ness
Roses
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Re: softly
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 06:22:48 AM AEST
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Awesome write...loved the mood in this...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: softly
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by blueheart on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 09:57:31 AM AEST
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Beautiful, just plain beautiful.
Lovely words. |
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Re: softly
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 12:22:55 PM AEST
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expertly written
pixie xx |
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Re: softly
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by yellow_sundragon on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 06:08:57 PM AEST
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Oh, Nessamom, it's beautiful... it stole my breath....
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Re: softly
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by Archie on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 05:12:16 PM AEST
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| Your poem is awesome your words remind me of a person sorting through his problems in some quiet place that he is soon to return from. |
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Re: softly
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by Merry on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 07:23:27 PM AEST
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hauntingly beautiful - written as only you can do -
hugs
merry |
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Re: softly
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by WinterFawn on
Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 11:29:46 AM AEST
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Dreamlike quality to this beautiful verse nessa...elegant and enchanting......whisperings linger of all things hallow...~sigh~..so very lovely....
WinterFawn |
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Re: softly
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 09:46:12 PM AEST
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| Nessa, I have been enjoying your creative thought. It's amazing. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: softly
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by colinb on
Monday, 4th August 2014 @ 01:58:17 PM AEST
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| Wonderfully creative Nessa |
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Re: softly
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 17th February 2015 @ 08:22:38 AM AEST
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This is so rich with metaphor and emotion.
A pool of nighttime at which I stare...
Great expression. Big hugs.
~Scorp |
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