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Array ( [sid] => 51965 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In love but unable to write [time] => 2004-06-14 22:02:29 [hometext] => this began as a sad attempt to write a poem, now its a plea for my writers block to go away, help!!!!! [bodytext] => once there was a time, when my words were dark and cruel
full of torment and of pain
like a blacked peice of coal
back in a time that seems a million years,
i could write dark poetry and feel that this was it
blood being my answer and death being my prayer
now i write and its the happy words
like flower and pink and things that used to make me sick
i almost look for unhappiness to write,
because evrything else i write turns out like ****!!!! [comments] => 2 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Lessa [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
In love but unable to write

Contributed by Lessa on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 10:02:29 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



once there was a time, when my words were dark and cruel
full of torment and of pain
like a blacked peice of coal
back in a time that seems a million years,
i could write dark poetry and feel that this was it
blood being my answer and death being my prayer
now i write and its the happy words
like flower and pink and things that used to make me sick
i almost look for unhappiness to write,
because evrything else i write turns out like ****!!!!




Copyright © Lessa ... [ 2004-06-14 22:02:29]
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Re: In love but unable to write (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 10:10:50 PM AEST
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well this could be worse in some ways. you could somehow make it to where pink is the color of evil or something i dont know. the only reason i dont have anything to write about is when no one is giving me grief. so i guess you have to find whatever makes you write so dark and bring it back.


Re: In love but unable to write (User Rating: 1 )
by buchi on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 09:44:54 AM AEST
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does
open your mind up....good poem




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