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To the outside world, I can see you
Your every move, whatever you are doing
But all that you can see, is your own reflection

I can see your smiles, see your tears
Watch you fighting, all your fears
Wishing I could help, pull you through
I'm stuck in my glasshouse, I can't reach you

I can see you falling, all the way down
I really want out to, turn you around
Smash this glasshouse, release me do
You save me and I'll save you

A new glasshouse,together we could find
Seal ourselves in, away from mankind
Away from the demons, in a vaccuum so bliss
In our glasshouse, well in my mind, that's all it is
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Living In A Glasshouse

Contributed by parkman on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:39:12 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Living in my glasshouse, I can see right through
To the outside world, I can see you
Your every move, whatever you are doing
But all that you can see, is your own reflection

I can see your smiles, see your tears
Watch you fighting, all your fears
Wishing I could help, pull you through
I'm stuck in my glasshouse, I can't reach you

I can see you falling, all the way down
I really want out to, turn you around
Smash this glasshouse, release me do
You save me and I'll save you

A new glasshouse,together we could find
Seal ourselves in, away from mankind
Away from the demons, in a vaccuum so bliss
In our glasshouse, well in my mind, that's all it is

Copyright © parkman ... [ 2004-06-14 13:39:12]
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Re: Living In A Glasshouse (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:45:50 PM AEST
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this is great love it
michelle

Re: Living In A Glasshouse (User Rating: 1 )
by Princesaazul16 on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:47:21 PM AEST
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Beautiful! Beautiful! Beautiful!! I loved it! Keep up the good work. Wonderful write.

~Stace~

Re: Living In A Glasshouse (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 02:02:55 PM AEST
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wonderfully written, full of longing and new beginnings, hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Living In A Glasshouse (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 02:47:45 PM AEST
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wow tht was AWESOME, and i can relate to it, its so0o0o0o good! great great great job!

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