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unless you're trying to help me feel again so you can remind me just how it is to feel pain again
well thanks, thanks for all you've done to help me hate again,
here's the ending

...i could tell by your goodbye , there'll be no end
like i'd seen the inside of your mind
so i'm running without looking back
but the road is circular, so here i am again
you only laugh and say that it always
starts and ends with me running away,
and i haven't even moved at all.
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the reminder pt. 3

Contributed by fallensilence on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:13:07 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

...this only serves as a reminder you know because you won't have anything to do with me
unless you're trying to help me feel again so you can remind me just how it is to feel pain again
well thanks, thanks for all you've done to help me hate again,
here's the ending

...i could tell by your goodbye , there'll be no end
like i'd seen the inside of your mind
so i'm running without looking back
but the road is circular, so here i am again
you only laugh and say that it always
starts and ends with me running away,
and i haven't even moved at all.

Copyright © fallensilence ... [ 2004-06-14 13:13:07]
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Re: the reminder pt. 3 (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:19:30 PM AEST
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great write!! this trilogy came out wonderful. i loved it alot. you have true talent..i love how this ended...

Re: the reminder pt. 3 (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:25:26 PM AEST
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these were amazingly written, the aching, pain and longing just tore me up, it really moved me how you showed the connection between them, heartwrenchingly beautiful poems!!! hugs n' love nessa

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Re: the reminder pt. 3 (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:59:19 PM AEST
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excellent...amazing, i love this, the pain just flows from it and embraces anyone that reads...soo beautiful...

Re: the reminder pt. 3 (User Rating: 1 )
by buchi on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 09:39:34 AM AEST
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wonderfully visionary and otherworldly write...

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