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Array ( [sid] => 51867 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Try Me [time] => 2004-06-14 11:14:13 [hometext] => To prove girls can do anything guys can, maybe with less fear...leave comments! [bodytext] => You always think I can't handle it,
I say try me, I'll make it through,
I've been through tougher stuff than you,
You say theres no way,
I say screw you and walk away,
One day, I'll prove that I can,
Than you'll want to be my man.

I'll climb that wall,
No big deal,
It's only five-hundred feet tall,
I'll do it again, I've done it before,
Even if the next day I was a little sore...

I need you're encouragment,
But you won't give in,
You think I'm a baby,
Oh, I'll show you I'm not,
I'll sleep for a year on a wood and cloth cot!
You say I can't, but I say "Oh Yes",
This is the ultimate test,
You ready I call,
Or are you scared,
You manage to stutter "No, not at all",
I laugh and climb down,
I just say,
Oh it's ok baby, maybe when your older,
Maybe another day... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 7 [informant] => LiLTor878 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => HumorPoetry )

Try Me

Contributed by LiLTor878 on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 11:14:13 AM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry

You always think I can't handle it,
I say try me, I'll make it through,
I've been through tougher stuff than you,
You say theres no way,
I say screw you and walk away,
One day, I'll prove that I can,
Than you'll want to be my man.

I'll climb that wall,
No big deal,
It's only five-hundred feet tall,
I'll do it again, I've done it before,
Even if the next day I was a little sore...

I need you're encouragment,
But you won't give in,
You think I'm a baby,
Oh, I'll show you I'm not,
I'll sleep for a year on a wood and cloth cot!
You say I can't, but I say "Oh Yes",
This is the ultimate test,
You ready I call,
Or are you scared,
You manage to stutter "No, not at all",
I laugh and climb down,
I just say,
Oh it's ok baby, maybe when your older,
Maybe another day...

Copyright © LiLTor878 ... [ 2004-06-14 11:14:13]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Try Me (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 11:18:00 AM AEST
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I really liked this,,,,,,,,, GIRL POWER!! I am all for it, great poem,

pixie xx

Re: Try Me (User Rating: 1 )
by slayer_015 on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 12:02:29 PM AEST
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to speak from the heart is golden.
I am a guy and i love this poem,
You go get him,
Make him bow,
AWESOME POETRY.

Brian

Re: Try Me (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 12:41:24 PM AEST
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you go girl!! Iv had to prove myself many times as well always having dudes telling me you cant do that well I did and watched them stand with mouths open I love your grit!!
Michelle

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