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Array ( [sid] => 51838 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Our Own Little Paradise [time] => 2004-06-14 07:01:05 [hometext] => [bodytext] => This is our special retreat,
A place that makes everything we are complete,
Our little piece of paradise,
Full of things that don’t come with a price.

This place was made for you and me,
Here is where we celebrate love and feel free,
Just shut your eyes and drift away,
Let yourself go and your thoughts sway.

This is like something out of a dream,
I feel like the cat who just got the cream,
This is something for you and me to share,
I don’t want to open my eyes, I don’t dare.

Our own little dream world,
A land for you and your special girl,
We seek this place when we seek sleep,
Somewhere in our hearts that we’ll forever keep.

I am ecstatic that this place exists,
To live here forever is my one true wish,
Me and my love surrounded by feelings so nice,
I’m so glad we’ve found our own little paradise.


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Our Own Little Paradise

Contributed by pixie on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 07:01:05 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



This is our special retreat,
A place that makes everything we are complete,
Our little piece of paradise,
Full of things that don’t come with a price.

This place was made for you and me,
Here is where we celebrate love and feel free,
Just shut your eyes and drift away,
Let yourself go and your thoughts sway.

This is like something out of a dream,
I feel like the cat who just got the cream,
This is something for you and me to share,
I don’t want to open my eyes, I don’t dare.

Our own little dream world,
A land for you and your special girl,
We seek this place when we seek sleep,
Somewhere in our hearts that we’ll forever keep.

I am ecstatic that this place exists,
To live here forever is my one true wish,
Me and my love surrounded by feelings so nice,
I’m so glad we’ve found our own little paradise.






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Re: Our Own Little Paradise (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 07:24:58 AM AEST
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a lovely sweet rhymeing poem - very nice idea of your own paradise. Nicely written too!


Re: Our Own Little Paradise (User Rating: 1 )
by RhythmBndt on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 09:25:42 AM AEST
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Very nice :) I can relate to that.


Re: Our Own Little Paradise (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 10:45:39 AM AEST
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Beautiful with the best of wishes for ya'll.


Re: Our Own Little Paradise (User Rating: 1 )
by SweetRhythm on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 11:02:57 AM AEST
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Auh that was lovely, really nice job as always. I really enjoy your writes, thanks for sharing all your stuff on YPDC.
Corinna


Re: Our Own Little Paradise (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:07:19 PM AEST
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so romanticly sweet and so beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Our Own Little Paradise (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 05:09:31 PM AEST
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How lovely. How lucky you are. Cherish it always. Lovely write.

Rita


Re: Our Own Little Paradise (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 05:42:08 PM AEST
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Aww! I'm smiling for you!! Your a cat who DESERVED the cream... hehe...

Great! Superb! Well done! Keep 'em coming...

Jaime


Re: Our Own Little Paradise (User Rating: 1 )
by WinterFox on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 06:15:59 AM AEST
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Sounds like the place to be with the one you love, Pixie. Very nice...Mike




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