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Sobbing pleas coming to late

Bones breaking beneath his fist
Blood flowing from the lips he kissed

Head slamming into the wall
To the ground she starts to fall

Prayers whispered through blood stained lips
Fists land and blood drips

Swirling darkness consumes her mind
Light dimming, her stare is blind

Leaning down into the light
Gently he kisses her goodnight
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Goodnight Kiss

Contributed by JadedExistence on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 12:08:39 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Black eyes glowing with hate
Sobbing pleas coming to late

Bones breaking beneath his fist
Blood flowing from the lips he kissed

Head slamming into the wall
To the ground she starts to fall

Prayers whispered through blood stained lips
Fists land and blood drips

Swirling darkness consumes her mind
Light dimming, her stare is blind

Leaning down into the light
Gently he kisses her goodnight

Copyright © JadedExistence ... [ 2004-06-14 00:08:39]
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Re: Goodnight Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by sunnyrainbows on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 12:36:45 AM AEST
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i like the rhyming couplets....
kinda morbid, with the mentioning of blood
but then again, it's under dark poetry =)

Re: Goodnight Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 04:22:00 AM AEST
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Dark yet very good read ..venkat

Re: Goodnight Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by srugglingyoungster on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 04:37:19 AM AEST
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very good. i know its sounds sick an twisted but, i love the darkness within the poem and i got a clear picture right away. a big plus!

Re: Goodnight Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 08:41:57 AM AEST
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great read, you captured this well,

pixie xx

Re: Goodnight Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 12:55:13 PM AEST
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wow this was amazing sounds like a scary dream you had, but it spawned some amazing poetry. It was good to see another thing by you. I loved the images in this poem

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Goodnight Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 07:19:41 AM AEST
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Wow, nasty...
Great write. A brilliant poem.
I have had dreams like this and they are definatly not pleasant.
I love the style.
*hugs* Phil xxx

Re: Goodnight Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 09:00:35 AM AEST
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Excellent poem.... truly dark & powerful.... loved it!!!

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