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Array ( [sid] => 51779 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Danny [time] => 2004-06-13 20:16:20 [hometext] => This is hard to explain: I wrote it about this guy that I know (his name isn't even Danny but that seemed to fit) who only talks to me when I'm feeling depressed. But he's really nice. [bodytext] => Danny doesn't mind me when I'm sad
He reaches out,
Tries to do what he can
Danny likes me when I'm depressed
Danny says I'm more than a pest

While the whole world
Walks right by
He'll stop and listen to me cry

When I don't feel like talking
Danny knows just what to say
And when I feel like dying
He doesn't let me fade away
When I feel like running
Danny makes me want to stay

Danny stops and listens
to my problems
Then leaves when
I'm okay [comments] => 3 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 55 [informant] => iluvpencils [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

Danny

Contributed by iluvpencils on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 08:16:20 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Danny doesn't mind me when I'm sad
He reaches out,
Tries to do what he can
Danny likes me when I'm depressed
Danny says I'm more than a pest

While the whole world
Walks right by
He'll stop and listen to me cry

When I don't feel like talking
Danny knows just what to say
And when I feel like dying
He doesn't let me fade away
When I feel like running
Danny makes me want to stay

Danny stops and listens
to my problems
Then leaves when
I'm okay

Copyright © iluvpencils ... [ 2004-06-13 20:16:20]
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Re: Danny (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 08:24:12 PM AEST
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Great poem and reminds me of a song

"But come ye back
when summer's
in the meadow
or when the valley's
hushed and white with snow
yes I'll be here
in sunshine
or in shadow
Oh danny boy Oh danny Boy
I love you so"

Verse sung by Sam Cooke in 1964

I hope the two of you grow closer in your friendship

Re: Danny (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 09:07:01 AM AEST
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awww... this is a beautiful poem

but:

"Danny stops and listens
to my problems
Then leaves when
I'm okay"

that is so sad...

I too hope your friendship grows closer.

Re: Danny (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 06:14:29 PM AEST
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I Like This Poem.

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