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Array ( [sid] => 51761 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Painted Window [time] => 2004-06-13 17:05:50 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Paint me up with diamonds
I don't want to go away
But I have to
To get away with you.

I pack up my old blue van
and wave good-bye to that yellow house
The one with the broken broken window
That closely resembles my heart.

We drive along the coast
the salt air tears my eyes
At least that's what I tell myself.

We sleep, we eat, we stop to breathe: You read a magazine.
Just like you used to do.

Paint me up with diamonds
I have to get away
I see you everywhere I go:
A faded image of you
I keep in my head.

It's creased and wrinkled now
but I can still hear you laugh
and I tell myself I don't miss you.

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Painted Window

Contributed by pavlovsbelle on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 05:05:50 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Paint me up with diamonds
I don't want to go away
But I have to
To get away with you.

I pack up my old blue van
and wave good-bye to that yellow house
The one with the broken broken window
That closely resembles my heart.

We drive along the coast
the salt air tears my eyes
At least that's what I tell myself.

We sleep, we eat, we stop to breathe: You read a magazine.
Just like you used to do.

Paint me up with diamonds
I have to get away
I see you everywhere I go:
A faded image of you
I keep in my head.

It's creased and wrinkled now
but I can still hear you laugh
and I tell myself I don't miss you.

Copyright © pavlovsbelle ... [ 2004-06-13 17:05:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Painted Window (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 05:10:21 PM AEST
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This looks good do you have a melodie worked out for it already?

Re: Painted Window (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Sunday, 12th April 2009 @ 03:10:57 PM AEST
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An interesting poem. Kind of a laid back flow, just a nice read. I really enjoyed the lines:
the salt air tears my eyes
At least that's what I tell myself.

Very nice!
Carol

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