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When he had to have things go his way
Didn't care if I cried
He had to steal my innocence that day
Didn't care that I said no
He didn't want me to tell
He grabbed me by my arm
Didn't think he'd do me harm
Threw me on the bed
And made me wish that I was dead
Didn't care that I was crying and yelling
Now inside, I'm slowly dying
I can't seem to move on
Since that peice of me is gone
And no matter what you say
You can't take this pain away.
that was the day he took my innocence away
i rocked my naked body trembling
and wishing i was dead crying in disgust
and wipping my tears of pain...
him touching my innocent body is what i know
was a sin
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MY SILENT CRY

Contributed by oneteartofellpain on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 04:43:14 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

He took a peice of me that day
When he had to have things go his way
Didn't care if I cried
He had to steal my innocence that day
Didn't care that I said no
He didn't want me to tell
He grabbed me by my arm
Didn't think he'd do me harm
Threw me on the bed
And made me wish that I was dead
Didn't care that I was crying and yelling
Now inside, I'm slowly dying
I can't seem to move on
Since that peice of me is gone
And no matter what you say
You can't take this pain away.
that was the day he took my innocence away
i rocked my naked body trembling
and wishing i was dead crying in disgust
and wipping my tears of pain...
him touching my innocent body is what i know
was a sin

Copyright © oneteartofellpain ... [ 2004-06-13 16:43:14]
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Re: MY SILENT CRY (User Rating: 1 )
by InnerBeautyQueen on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 05:20:33 PM AEST
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i love your poem and im really sad that happened to you. i know that probably doesn't mean much because nothing that bad has ever happened to me but i'm still sad.

Re: MY SILENT CRY (User Rating: 1 )
by willow_tara72002 on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 06:02:12 PM AEST
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This was really sad,. and well written. I know i couldnt ever feel what you feel now because that happened, but i know how i would feel if that happened to me, that happened to one of my close friends, and. i wish you never had to go through that. take care

-Amber

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