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Array ( [sid] => 51754 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You can have it [time] => 2004-06-13 16:41:04 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You can have my life
For it is no more
I lost my soul
When you walked out the door

You can laugh at my pain
you can watch me cry
you can take my love
and watch it die

you can have my heart
and rip it in two
my heart means nothing
if i dont have you

you can have my feelings
and push them aside
just stand there a watch
as i drown in the tears ive cried

you can have my life
and throw it away
it doesnt mean anything
not to you anyway

you can watch my lasd breath
my last intake of air
you will be happy to see it
its not like you care

you can have everything
i have nothing no more
cause the person i loved
walked out the door [comments] => 1 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 36 [informant] => lil_angel_eyes [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

You can have it

Contributed by lil_angel_eyes on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 04:41:04 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

You can have my life
For it is no more
I lost my soul
When you walked out the door

You can laugh at my pain
you can watch me cry
you can take my love
and watch it die

you can have my heart
and rip it in two
my heart means nothing
if i dont have you

you can have my feelings
and push them aside
just stand there a watch
as i drown in the tears ive cried

you can have my life
and throw it away
it doesnt mean anything
not to you anyway

you can watch my lasd breath
my last intake of air
you will be happy to see it
its not like you care

you can have everything
i have nothing no more
cause the person i loved
walked out the door

Copyright © lil_angel_eyes ... [ 2004-06-13 16:41:04]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: You can have it (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 09:43:25 AM AEST
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wow, this is so powerful , takecare and thanks for sharing

pixie xx

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