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[sid] => 51719
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[aid] => mick
[title] => When I See You Smile
[time] => 2004-06-13 11:18:30
[hometext] => I see more clearly when you smile
[bodytext] => (Introduction)
The world is such a grandios creation
Colors brighten up our dim heart's vision
The birds make nests up in the trees for summer
The squirrels gather chestnuts happily for the winter
And the sunlight of the sunrise
brings new strength
It's viewing is from God above a gift
The gentle breeze
with all of its sensations
is your smile
Life is your smile
(Verses)
When I see you smile
the world becomes a brand new place
and not so much of a rat race
where people lack devotion for each other
When I see you smile
The mumblecrusts are given bread
and every child his proper care
The rich and wealthy voluteer to share
(Chorus)
And the world is not a pungant place to live
For the Creator has taught us how to give
(and we are all a progeny of him)
I see so clearly his vision
For he has removed the prism
I view it when I see you smile.
When I see you smile
The wars and threats are gone away
no grieving one to mourn o're graves
Every person lives in utter peace
Even though the world is not like that right now
Theres a hope I see that in your heart abounds
If everyone just did his part
Choose freely to lift up one heart
It's so sad that only a few look to see
you smile
[comments] => 14
[counter] => 207
[topic] => 34
[informant] => Archie
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 24
[ratings] => 5
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => SongLyrics
)
When I See You Smile
Contributed by
Archie
on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:18:30 AM in AEST
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(Introduction)
The world is such a grandios creation
Colors brighten up our dim heart's vision
The birds make nests up in the trees for summer
The squirrels gather chestnuts happily for the winter
And the sunlight of the sunrise
brings new strength
It's viewing is from God above a gift
The gentle breeze
with all of its sensations
is your smile
Life is your smile
(Verses)
When I see you smile
the world becomes a brand new place
and not so much of a rat race
where people lack devotion for each other
When I see you smile
The mumblecrusts are given bread
and every child his proper care
The rich and wealthy voluteer to share
(Chorus)
And the world is not a pungant place to live
For the Creator has taught us how to give
(and we are all a progeny of him)
I see so clearly his vision
For he has removed the prism
I view it when I see you smile.
When I see you smile
The wars and threats are gone away
no grieving one to mourn o're graves
Every person lives in utter peace
Even though the world is not like that right now
Theres a hope I see that in your heart abounds
If everyone just did his part
Choose freely to lift up one heart
It's so sad that only a few look to see
you smile
Copyright ©
Archie
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2004-06-13 11:18:30]
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Re: When I See You Smile
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:26:18 AM AEST
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Lovely
Shari |
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Re: When I See You Smile
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by Overstated on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:40:29 AM AEST
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beautiful just beautiful!!! superbly wrote
- you are one of the most gifted songwriters i've read so far on YPDC.
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Re: When I See You Smile
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by pixie on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:54:53 AM AEST
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wow, this is great, I normally don't read the song lyrics, but I thought I would and I am very impressed
pixie xx |
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Re: When I See You Smile
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by Luinil on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 12:07:21 PM AEST
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| very beautifully written * |
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Re: When I See You Smile
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 12:08:06 PM AEST
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Impressive!!! I love this....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: When I See You Smile
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by carmen_queasy on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 12:46:14 PM AEST
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| that was beautiful |
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Re: When I See You Smile
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by Puppy on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 01:08:52 PM AEST
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I found this poem quite sad this poem is beautfully written
Puppy :) |
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Re: When I See You Smile
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 03:44:41 PM AEST
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very well written archie!! simply beautiful!! i love the nature aspect:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: When I See You Smile
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 04:47:49 PM AEST
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I think of smiles as a tiny bit of love from your heart that you share with the world. There is nothing more beautiful than a heartfelt smile shared with others. They can light up the darkest hour.
Rita |
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Re: When I See You Smile
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 04:48:25 PM AEST
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You are a masterful song writer sir,
my hat's off to ya.
Very well done
Larry |
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Re: When I See You Smile
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by Ethereal_Engine on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 08:02:46 PM AEST
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| Wow that was really pretty. Its amazing how something as simple as a smile from a loved one can take away all pain, suffering, and crap that we all have to put up with. You have some very nice visuals hear, in the beginning especially with all the nature scenery. Heh I don't like the term comment, I like the idea of a review, you know offer feedback and tell a tale perhaps. I'm new here and prefer to treat this site like Acid Planet, where I post my music and will follow my policy of Review=Review ^^. Thanks for your "comments" lol on Terra. |
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Re: When I See You Smile
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by Kie on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 09:28:39 PM AEST
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To me there is something disarming and mesmerizing in an honest smile. I can't help but smile myself.
This was a treat to read. You wrote it so well and it is something to be proud of.
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Re: When I See You Smile
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 04:44:21 AM AEST
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| Awww.. I love the beauty of nature..you have done a wonderful job..this is very sweet and beautiful. venkat |
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Re: When I See You Smile
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 02:54:16 PM AEST
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I like this, too. It's like listening to my Christian Radio station---both beautiful and uplifting. I must try to fit in more time for reading. I'm missing on some good stuff here.
Stitch |
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