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Have You Ever Wondered?

Contributed by vinnie731 on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 10:28:25 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

have you wondered what’s wrong with you, haven’t you fallen to your knees begging for forgiveness because I have, my pain keeps building questioning what’s in this life for me, do you understand the sins I’ve committed, does any one really care, too much greed fills the world and not enough love and hope, every day is different than the last, common grounds we all live hoping for freedom, free your mind, live happy, don’t live like me depression is suffered by many but there is hope for those suffering from pain and sadness, there are people who give their life for every one but themselves. I would give my soul to some one who's in need but I’m in need of life, does my life grow is my soul always going to be bruised can I ever heal will people ever understand or are we all blind to the pain of the world, there is a place in this world for every one and that includes you, suicide was once a question but I no longer need to search out the answer because I have been freed I live life happy no longer sad, I have to thank the world for helping me up when I was down, have you ever wondered what’s wrong with you cause I have but there is always a rainbow after the rain so keep your head up and someday you will be free.

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Re: Have You Ever Wondered? (User Rating: 1 )
by GODSBESTIMAGE on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 07:01:48 PM AEST
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GOD BLESS,

I FELT THE SAME WAY UNTIL I FOUND JESUS NOW I UNDERSTAND WHY HE DOES WHAT HE DOES. TRY HIM

ALL THESE TRIALS AND TRIBULATIONS WE ARE ALL GOING THROUGH, HE DOES IT BECAUSE HE WANTS US TO COME TO HIM SO WE CAN BE SAVED. HE GIVES US TEST TO SEE IF WE CAN PASS. HE WILL NOT GIVE YOU MORE THAN YOU CAN BARE PLUS AT THE END YOU WILL GET YOUR REWARD. STAY STRONG.

GWENDOLYN

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