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that will feed tomorrows dreams.
Yeah, it's yesterdays pain,
that makes us stronger once again.

It's morning sunshine,
that reminds us of the flames.
Yeah, those same flames,
that leave our dreams in dust.

You were the blood in my veins,
but when you pulled out my heart,
like a river you flowed out of me,
and left me stained in my lifes water.

When you give your heart, the only way you get it back is in pieces.
When you fall in love you have everything to lose.
You shattered my soul and left it's jagged edges to cut my insides.
All i'm left with now are blood stained memories. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 251 [topic] => 6 [informant] => steven_fenton1982 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 30 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Blood Stained Memories

Contributed by steven_fenton1982 on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 08:40:43 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

It's todays tears,
that will feed tomorrows dreams.
Yeah, it's yesterdays pain,
that makes us stronger once again.

It's morning sunshine,
that reminds us of the flames.
Yeah, those same flames,
that leave our dreams in dust.

You were the blood in my veins,
but when you pulled out my heart,
like a river you flowed out of me,
and left me stained in my lifes water.

When you give your heart, the only way you get it back is in pieces.
When you fall in love you have everything to lose.
You shattered my soul and left it's jagged edges to cut my insides.
All i'm left with now are blood stained memories.

Copyright © steven_fenton1982 ... [ 2004-06-13 08:40:43]
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Re: Blood Stained Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 08:58:16 AM AEST
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good title!
so sorry of here of your loss and pain. i hpe you heal.

Re: Blood Stained Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 09:21:07 AM AEST
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Ouch, definitely don't wanna be where you are right now. That's how good the poem was - full of emotion and I admire your writing style. Well done.

Re: Blood Stained Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by linagalMBfan01 on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 09:56:44 AM AEST
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this was great really emotional you put a lot in to this it is really great

lina

Re: Blood Stained Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by deadbloodyrose on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:33:49 AM AEST
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i relate to this poem so well.. you did an great job on it as well. i really like it.. AMI JO

Re: Blood Stained Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:43:48 AM AEST
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very emotional and raw, sorry for your pain,

pixie xx

Re: Blood Stained Memories (User Rating: 1 )
by LiquidChaos on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 10:40:25 AM AEST
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this is awesome.

When you give your heart, the only way you get it back is in pieces.

so true. and so tragic. but a broken heart can be mended! so don't give up hope.

this was a great write!

::clicks furiously to read more of steven's stuff!::

keep it up!

addie

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