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Up in a half pony tail.
Eye make-up nice and black,
With no dusty trails.
Skin sweet and soft,
With barely any spots.
But, don’t use white foundation,
When I wanna Goth.
Short black lacey tops,
Or soft long-sleeved/ dark colour streamed ones.
Skirts/ hoodies/ big boots,
Black trousers/ or normal skater shoes.
Black or purple,
Sharp and long nails,
To make me look,
Abnormal.

I don’t wanna be a towney.
Coz personally I see them as sheep’s.
Being a Goth makes nothing rule me,
I wear what I like --- HEY! I’m not dissing my community!
Some people look at us lot,
And then they start to judge.
Why should our clothes rule our personality?
So don’t treat us like sludge!
I know some with piercings,
That are totally cool people.
I know others with full Goth make-up,
That aren’t evil!

So next time you see one or some, of us.
Walking down the street,
Please don’t turn up your nose.
Just except them as a human being!!!
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Don't Judge Us, Just By Lookig At Us!

Contributed by deathdrop on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 07:08:35 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Black Hair nice and smooth,
Up in a half pony tail.
Eye make-up nice and black,
With no dusty trails.
Skin sweet and soft,
With barely any spots.
But, don’t use white foundation,
When I wanna Goth.
Short black lacey tops,
Or soft long-sleeved/ dark colour streamed ones.
Skirts/ hoodies/ big boots,
Black trousers/ or normal skater shoes.
Black or purple,
Sharp and long nails,
To make me look,
Abnormal.

I don’t wanna be a towney.
Coz personally I see them as sheep’s.
Being a Goth makes nothing rule me,
I wear what I like --- HEY! I’m not dissing my community!
Some people look at us lot,
And then they start to judge.
Why should our clothes rule our personality?
So don’t treat us like sludge!
I know some with piercings,
That are totally cool people.
I know others with full Goth make-up,
That aren’t evil!

So next time you see one or some, of us.
Walking down the street,
Please don’t turn up your nose.
Just except them as a human being!!!

Copyright Â© deathdrop ... [ 2004-06-13 07:08:35]
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Re: Don't Judge Us, Just By Lookig At Us! (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 07:17:09 AM AEST
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I too am sick of being judged by the way i look.
This is a good write. A few spelling mistakes, but overall very good.

*hugs*
Phil xxx

Re: Don't Judge Us, Just By Lookig At Us! (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 07:21:13 AM AEST
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EXCELLENT - this made me smile and reminded me of when I was a teenager - way back in the hippy days and we got treated the same way, being called "dirty hippies" and worse. Enjoy being just the way you are and never change.

Hugs
merry

Re: Don't Judge Us, Just By Lookig At Us! (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 09:26:34 AM AEST
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I hear ya loud and clear, I hate being judged by glances and looks. This is an empowering poem, go you;)

Re: Don't Judge Us, Just By Lookig At Us! (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:10:23 AM AEST
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Great poem, I get stared at because I have a few tattoos on my arms and it is still considered acceptable for a man to have as many as I do but a woman gets frowned upon Grrrrrr makes me so mad!!!!

Really liked your poem,
pixie xx

Re: Don't Judge Us, Just By Lookig At Us! (User Rating: 1 )
by deadbloodyrose on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 11:24:42 AM AEST
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if only more peopel could be like this and not judge someone based on their outter appearance.. our world would be such a better place.. AMI JO

Re: Don't Judge Us, Just By Lookig At Us! (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 02:16:26 PM AEST
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Ohhh... good job! You made your point well! I enjoyed this.... keep 'em coming!

Re: Don't Judge Us, Just By Lookig At Us! (User Rating: 1 )
by screwup on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 04:39:30 PM AEST
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I really like this poem...it makes perfect sense. I hate when people stare at me for the way I look just because I wear all black and stuff. and I also hate people going around saying "goth girl". you really got the point across with your poem, good job.

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