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Array ( [sid] => 51684 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Without you there is no me [time] => 2004-06-13 04:34:28 [hometext] => It's true and everything but I had the movie Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind in my head as well. I wrote it this morning. [bodytext] => You’re tearing me up inside, silently
You’re tearing me up inside
As I lay here trying not to cry
Yet the memories are so vivid, I could die
Mr Memory, save me please
Erase this memory, erase this dream
Please let me forget him so I can be
Because without him, there is no me

I’m sorry that I hurt you this way
I’m sorry that I hurt you
I cannot stay here anymore
I’ve never felt this way before

I lay here silently, wishing I knew
If you really need me the way I need you
And still Mr Memory comes to life
And invades every inch of my tortured mind

Mr Memory, please erase
I cannot take this pain today
Please let me forget him, it hurts me so
Please let him forget why I let him go

And here I stand a broken memory
Right here in front of you
Hand to hand, confusion stands
I have no recollection, and neither do you

Mr Memory, come back to me
This memory means so much to me
I want him back, I want him back
Yet in my mind he’s under attack

Mr Memory, the pain did cease
Because without him here, there is no me. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 48 [informant] => carmen_queasy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Without you there is no me

Contributed by carmen_queasy on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 04:34:28 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



You’re tearing me up inside, silently
You’re tearing me up inside
As I lay here trying not to cry
Yet the memories are so vivid, I could die
Mr Memory, save me please
Erase this memory, erase this dream
Please let me forget him so I can be
Because without him, there is no me

I’m sorry that I hurt you this way
I’m sorry that I hurt you
I cannot stay here anymore
I’ve never felt this way before

I lay here silently, wishing I knew
If you really need me the way I need you
And still Mr Memory comes to life
And invades every inch of my tortured mind

Mr Memory, please erase
I cannot take this pain today
Please let me forget him, it hurts me so
Please let him forget why I let him go

And here I stand a broken memory
Right here in front of you
Hand to hand, confusion stands
I have no recollection, and neither do you

Mr Memory, come back to me
This memory means so much to me
I want him back, I want him back
Yet in my mind he’s under attack

Mr Memory, the pain did cease
Because without him here, there is no me.




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Re: Without you there is no me (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 02:22:53 PM AEST
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that was beautifully written and very emotional keep up the good woprk I give it a 10 outta 10
read and comment my stuff if you want Id love to hear what you think....
much love,
Dani




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