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Array ( [sid] => 51666 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Goodbye to the Jerk [time] => 2004-06-13 00:41:24 [hometext] => This is to the no good men out there that don't know how to treat women right. This is really my only really angry poem that I have wrote. For the few good men out there.. i'm sorry so many of your species suck! [bodytext] => Our conversations have run dry
The situation is going stale
Our communication is a joke
We don't even exchange a note
When we're together I feel alone
When we're apart I feel the same
While we kiss, I start to list
All the things that have gone wrong;
We haven't talked in so long
Things have changed
And so have you
You sit there silent with nothing to say
And look at me as if everything is okay
Something is missing from my puzzle;
You've once filled it,
But have now killed it
You've rearranged the pieces;
Nothing is where it was before
You're ripped apart my life;
Destroyed my very being
You ruined it way too fast;
I don't know how long I can last
I've learned my lesson with so much regret
And as I move on in life, It's you I'll forget
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Seans_Girl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
Goodbye to the Jerk

Contributed by Seans_Girl on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 12:41:24 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Our conversations have run dry
The situation is going stale
Our communication is a joke
We don't even exchange a note
When we're together I feel alone
When we're apart I feel the same
While we kiss, I start to list
All the things that have gone wrong;
We haven't talked in so long
Things have changed
And so have you
You sit there silent with nothing to say
And look at me as if everything is okay
Something is missing from my puzzle;
You've once filled it,
But have now killed it
You've rearranged the pieces;
Nothing is where it was before
You're ripped apart my life;
Destroyed my very being
You ruined it way too fast;
I don't know how long I can last
I've learned my lesson with so much regret
And as I move on in life, It's you I'll forget




Copyright © Seans_Girl ... [ 2004-06-13 00:41:24]
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Re: Goodbye to the Jerk (User Rating: 1 )
by InnerBeautyQueen on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 12:45:46 AM AEST
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!!! wow! that's filled with so much emotion, it's really great! im speechless


Re: Goodbye to the Jerk (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 01:28:49 AM AEST
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This is good, wait to stick to too all the a$*% Hole men out there! They do make the rest of us look bad.


Re: Goodbye to the Jerk (User Rating: 1 )
by RockNwhls on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 09:08:13 AM AEST
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i feel the rage......i've been burnt and thrashed b4, this is great!!




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