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[aid] => mick
[title] => failure
[time] => 2004-06-12 22:51:35
[hometext] => this is a poem before i went in to have surgery.. and this is what i hoped would happen.. it obviously didnt work out that way
[bodytext] => the line is marked for the perfect place where the single cut should be made with confidence the knife digs in blade follows the precise guidelines trails of blood follow the knife pale white skin covered in deep red everything looks fine standard book procedure skin is ripped apart and laid on the body everything is visible to the world now bones lay there calmly held in with rods cautious hands pick up new sterile tools slowly the intense work finally begins silence is pierced with high pitch beeps red lights flashing franticly blood begins to flow out like rapids everyone rushes trying to help in any way beads of sweat drip off frightened faces hands bump into each other trying to work everyone stands around the six foot bed heads hung low consumed with dissapointment finally the machine is shut off bringing silence sheet is drawn over the 16 year old face slowly the workes file out without a word one man is left in the room with his failure [comments] => 3 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 48 [informant] => deadbloodyrose [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
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