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but I can’t see the sun
my heart is aching
from what you’ve done
you let us go so quickly
and didn’t even miss me
I thought that it wouldn’t change much
but you’ve messed up
I’m not to blame
but I’m the one who hurts
the victim of your game
and your hurtful words
it’s mid-day now
but my world is still black
I can’t bear to think how
I could let you come back
but the past is behind us
and it won’t ever change
and the future will blind us
if we rearrange
so just go ahead and walk away
and remember
it wouldn’t hurt me anyway [comments] => 6 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 22 [informant] => im_sory_i_cant_be_perfect [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

It Didn't Really Hurt

Contributed by im_sory_i_cant_be_perfect on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 07:05:12 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Dawn is breaking
but I can’t see the sun
my heart is aching
from what you’ve done
you let us go so quickly
and didn’t even miss me
I thought that it wouldn’t change much
but you’ve messed up
I’m not to blame
but I’m the one who hurts
the victim of your game
and your hurtful words
it’s mid-day now
but my world is still black
I can’t bear to think how
I could let you come back
but the past is behind us
and it won’t ever change
and the future will blind us
if we rearrange
so just go ahead and walk away
and remember
it wouldn’t hurt me anyway

Copyright Â© im_sory_i_cant_be_perfect ... [ 2004-06-12 19:05:12]
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Re: It Didn't Really Hurt (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 07:08:45 PM AEST
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that's a really sad poem. i like it.

Re: It Didn't Really Hurt (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 07:10:02 PM AEST
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nicely done, this is a good write nice flow to it. welcome to YDPC and I look foward to more of your poems A++++

Re: It Didn't Really Hurt (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 07:11:03 PM AEST
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this was breathtaking. so very sad and filled with deep emotion. your flow was perfect. such a beautiful write.
i loved this.
i look forward to more from you.
Arden

Re: It Didn't Really Hurt (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 07:36:11 PM AEST
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wow thts good! u tell them! i luved it , it was very good , great great job!

Re: It Didn't Really Hurt (User Rating: 1 )
by lilch4ever on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 07:37:09 PM AEST
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Wow that was really good. Loved the way it flowed. Really loved this peom excellent write.

Re: It Didn't Really Hurt (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 09:47:44 PM AEST
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Very nicely done! This rings of honesty.... It is, I think, a private, internal thought dropped out onto the page - the way the best poems come to life. Thanks for sharing - and Welcome to YPDC!

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