Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 29-May 15:28:34 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 51583 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Manufactured Under The Authority Of Time [time] => 2004-06-12 15:50:46 [hometext] => please comment on my poems on this site/thanks for looking guys&girls! [bodytext] => I have no feet for rhythm.
I don’t have to move until I’m provoked,
My words will make you choke.
If you don’t like it you can be on your way,
No one here is making you stay.
You talk about the feelings,
That never showed me meanings.
I’ll never need a man,
To show the world where I stand.
I will never be misleaded,
Or allow myself to be mistreated.
I’m the speaker of the house,
I don’t like to play cat& mouse.
My strength you will not break,
My faith, no man can take.
Is my attitude something you’d follow?,
Are my words to hard for you to swallow?
Can you see your self with me,
Knowing the way I can sometimes be?
I’m speaking words I’d thought I never say,
I have no clue how I got this way.
I know what I do,
& I partly blame you.
I live in the divided state of hypocrisy,
Surrounded by everyone’s democracy.
I’ll leave a sour taste in your mouth,
& you still won’t figure me out.
I will always be the party’s host,
& I don’t care if I hurt you the most.
I got the rep of a villain,
With a face that’s appealing.
I’ve swallowed all I could,
If I could get rid of you I would.
I lose all control,
When my emotions out they stroll.
My words can be great,
& at the same time degrade.
Too much pride between you &I,
Never getting anywhere will all the lies.
Sometimes the world passes me by,
So I sit down to cry.
My heart grows colder,
As time makes me older.
The tears that you’ve tasted,
Don’t compare to the 2yrs that I wasted.
Time is changing,
Young faces aging,
Innocent hearts are ragging.
In this world of Illusion,
I live among it’s confusion.
I fly when I can’t see,
I walk with out sense in me.
You made a big mess,
I’d love to love you less.
I want to fall on my face ,
When I’m looked upon as the” disgrace”.
I have to watch what they say,
So I’m told to act a certain way.
You demand of me,
The thing’s you’ll never be.
Not being able to keep social relations,
That don’t meet your demanding expectations.
I wish I could unscrew,
Everything I do.
I’m tired of waiting,
While my opportunities are escaping.
Life makes me relate,
to all that I hate.
I can’t sit still,
I always feel empty ,like there’s something to fill.
What do I do when what I feel,
Turns out to be real?









[comments] => 2 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Avila [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Manufactured Under The Authority Of Time

Contributed by Avila on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 03:50:46 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I have no feet for rhythm.
I don’t have to move until I’m provoked,
My words will make you choke.
If you don’t like it you can be on your way,
No one here is making you stay.
You talk about the feelings,
That never showed me meanings.
I’ll never need a man,
To show the world where I stand.
I will never be misleaded,
Or allow myself to be mistreated.
I’m the speaker of the house,
I don’t like to play cat& mouse.
My strength you will not break,
My faith, no man can take.
Is my attitude something you’d follow?,
Are my words to hard for you to swallow?
Can you see your self with me,
Knowing the way I can sometimes be?
I’m speaking words I’d thought I never say,
I have no clue how I got this way.
I know what I do,
& I partly blame you.
I live in the divided state of hypocrisy,
Surrounded by everyone’s democracy.
I’ll leave a sour taste in your mouth,
& you still won’t figure me out.
I will always be the party’s host,
& I don’t care if I hurt you the most.
I got the rep of a villain,
With a face that’s appealing.
I’ve swallowed all I could,
If I could get rid of you I would.
I lose all control,
When my emotions out they stroll.
My words can be great,
& at the same time degrade.
Too much pride between you &I,
Never getting anywhere will all the lies.
Sometimes the world passes me by,
So I sit down to cry.
My heart grows colder,
As time makes me older.
The tears that you’ve tasted,
Don’t compare to the 2yrs that I wasted.
Time is changing,
Young faces aging,
Innocent hearts are ragging.
In this world of Illusion,
I live among it’s confusion.
I fly when I can’t see,
I walk with out sense in me.
You made a big mess,
I’d love to love you less.
I want to fall on my face ,
When I’m looked upon as the” disgrace”.
I have to watch what they say,
So I’m told to act a certain way.
You demand of me,
The thing’s you’ll never be.
Not being able to keep social relations,
That don’t meet your demanding expectations.
I wish I could unscrew,
Everything I do.
I’m tired of waiting,
While my opportunities are escaping.
Life makes me relate,
to all that I hate.
I can’t sit still,
I always feel empty ,like there’s something to fill.
What do I do when what I feel,
Turns out to be real?













Copyright © Avila ... [ 2004-06-12 15:50:46]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: Manufactured Under The Authority Of Time (User Rating: 1 )
by carmen_queasy on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 04:09:59 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
This is a great poem. It sounds like a rap to be honest. I love the line "I'd love to love you less"


Re: Manufactured Under The Authority Of Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 12:34:05 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
very good. excellent.




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com