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Do you know that you have caused me pain?
You seem to have cared, but that was just your plan.
You attacked all my weaknesses.
I feel lost, confused, and defenseless.
All my empty emotions are caused by you.
Self-injury never seemed to help me.
Your nasty glares could see all my scars.
I know you are the one that has hurt me.
Outside of hell, I stare up at the stars.
This is where I want to lay forever.
Don't bother me with your selfish requests.
I could just stare up at burning lights for eternity.
I feel so powerful and refreshed
I stand to my feet and realize it's morning.
My heart begins to sting.
I don't want to go into hell, for you remain there.
But, for now... I can face your wrath.
For I have all my weaknesses cleansed.
Glare at me and I am open enough to laugh.
You cannot hurt me more than you already have.
So, try some else, I won't take your crap. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 25 [informant] => SilentPwn [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

Father of Hell.

Contributed by SilentPwn on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 03:35:01 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Hello there, father.
Do you know that you have caused me pain?
You seem to have cared, but that was just your plan.
You attacked all my weaknesses.
I feel lost, confused, and defenseless.
All my empty emotions are caused by you.
Self-injury never seemed to help me.
Your nasty glares could see all my scars.
I know you are the one that has hurt me.
Outside of hell, I stare up at the stars.
This is where I want to lay forever.
Don't bother me with your selfish requests.
I could just stare up at burning lights for eternity.
I feel so powerful and refreshed
I stand to my feet and realize it's morning.
My heart begins to sting.
I don't want to go into hell, for you remain there.
But, for now... I can face your wrath.
For I have all my weaknesses cleansed.
Glare at me and I am open enough to laugh.
You cannot hurt me more than you already have.
So, try some else, I won't take your crap.

Copyright © SilentPwn ... [ 2004-06-12 15:35:01]
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Re: Father of Hell. (User Rating: 1 )
by carmen_queasy on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 03:45:36 PM AEST
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that was really sad. But it was powerful.

Re: Father of Hell. (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 03:45:38 PM AEST
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well written. strong wording has a good flow to it. A+++

Re: Father of Hell. (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 04:52:52 PM AEST
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good poem I liked that even through your pain you seem to remain strong and be advised that you are not alone my dad always seems to hurt me as well...

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Father of Hell. (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 05:16:19 PM AEST
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great write...very powerful...nice flow great feeling...I loved it...keep it up keep it coming
read and comment my stuff if you want, Id love to hear what you think
much love,
Dani

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