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Array ( [sid] => 51560 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fatal Wishing... [time] => 2004-06-12 12:11:59 [hometext] => -shrugs- I doubt it is any good, but, right now, I don't care what it is. Comment, if you wish. [bodytext] => All my emotion is held together, tight.
There's no way to break this glue; I've tried.
I wish for this to all be done and over.
But, wishing gets me nowhere, it just keeps me under.
At my funeral won't you please cry.
You deserve to be in this casket, not I.
Cry, my darling, you deserve to be dead.
Start looking back at how I bled.
I stumbled over your supposed innocence.
Look at how I died, wishing for us again.
Look how you killed me, I just can't understand.
Why would you do this to me.
No one believed my cries.
How could you let me bleed.
Everyone took your side.
At my funeral, love, won't you please beg.
It wasn't suppose to be me, you were to be dead.
You lied to my family, saying you would never hurt me.
I tried to kill you, but you caught on just in time.
After your knife slit my throat the blood wouldn't stop.
I guess your love was never right.
After my funeral, dear, please become yourself.
Stop to cry and beg for I know your lying.
No one catches on to what I said.
It's too late to realize that I'm correct.
You covered my scars with your crying.
No one noticed that I was dying.
My family believed you more than they ever cared about me.
So, my darling, you've set me free.
It hurt, yes, but in the long run I must thank you.
My life was so messed up and screwed.
I was destined to a life of hell anyway.
So, you just helped me to complete why I was here all along.
I was born to be dead, my love
So, thank you for what you've done. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 25 [informant] => SilentPwn [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
Fatal Wishing...

Contributed by SilentPwn on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 12:11:59 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



All my emotion is held together, tight.
There's no way to break this glue; I've tried.
I wish for this to all be done and over.
But, wishing gets me nowhere, it just keeps me under.
At my funeral won't you please cry.
You deserve to be in this casket, not I.
Cry, my darling, you deserve to be dead.
Start looking back at how I bled.
I stumbled over your supposed innocence.
Look at how I died, wishing for us again.
Look how you killed me, I just can't understand.
Why would you do this to me.
No one believed my cries.
How could you let me bleed.
Everyone took your side.
At my funeral, love, won't you please beg.
It wasn't suppose to be me, you were to be dead.
You lied to my family, saying you would never hurt me.
I tried to kill you, but you caught on just in time.
After your knife slit my throat the blood wouldn't stop.
I guess your love was never right.
After my funeral, dear, please become yourself.
Stop to cry and beg for I know your lying.
No one catches on to what I said.
It's too late to realize that I'm correct.
You covered my scars with your crying.
No one noticed that I was dying.
My family believed you more than they ever cared about me.
So, my darling, you've set me free.
It hurt, yes, but in the long run I must thank you.
My life was so messed up and screwed.
I was destined to a life of hell anyway.
So, you just helped me to complete why I was here all along.
I was born to be dead, my love
So, thank you for what you've done.




Copyright © SilentPwn ... [ 2004-06-12 12:11:59]
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Re: Fatal Wishing... (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 03:15:15 PM AEST
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wow great write...I loved it...it was a beautiful write....lots and lots of emotion makes it a masterpiece!!!! I loved it...keep it up keep it coming
read and comment my stuff if you want Id love to hear what you think...
much love,
Dani


Re: Fatal Wishing... (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 12:37:02 PM AEST
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wow this was captivating a very dark, almost meditative poem. I loved it keep on posting Kristen!

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Fatal Wishing... (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 12:12:48 AM AEST
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amazing write.




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