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Array ( [sid] => 5156 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love I want [time] => 2002-10-16 07:30:00 [hometext] => The way i feel. My first cotribution. Give me some feedback, good or bad. [bodytext] => Love I want

Each man dreams a different dream is his life,
Some want the money, the power, a wife.

Some want the glory, some want the fame,
I don’t think that any two are really the same.

What I want from life is a chance to be me,
To love with a passion, an urge to be free.

I want to love you and lead you to where we should be,
And then in return, I hope you love me,

Because to love someone freely is often an ask,
But to get it returned is sometimes a task.

I tell you my darling we start out as friends,
That part of this baby, I hope never ends.

Then if we are taken on loves’ winding road,
Then I promise my darling, I’ll carry the load.

To love and to care and carry us through,
I promise my darling, I’ll always love you.
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 233 [topic] => 2 [informant] => markey [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Love I want

Contributed by markey on Wednesday, 16th October 2002 @ 07:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Love I want

Each man dreams a different dream is his life,
Some want the money, the power, a wife.

Some want the glory, some want the fame,
I don’t think that any two are really the same.

What I want from life is a chance to be me,
To love with a passion, an urge to be free.

I want to love you and lead you to where we should be,
And then in return, I hope you love me,

Because to love someone freely is often an ask,
But to get it returned is sometimes a task.

I tell you my darling we start out as friends,
That part of this baby, I hope never ends.

Then if we are taken on loves’ winding road,
Then I promise my darling, I’ll carry the load.

To love and to care and carry us through,
I promise my darling, I’ll always love you.

Copyright Â© markey ... [ 2002-10-16 07:30:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Love I want (User Rating: 1 )
by orgygirl on Wednesday, 16th October 2002 @ 08:25:18 AM AEST
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I thought this poem was very sweet. Nice work for a first posting. Kepp it up.

Take care

Rebecca

Re: Love I want (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Wednesday, 16th October 2002 @ 10:18:24 AM AEST
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Your rhyme and rhythm is excellent ... and a really nice message in the words.

Re: Love I want (User Rating: 1 )
by Lovingangel4u on Wednesday, 16th October 2002 @ 06:07:48 PM AEST
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This is really beautifully written with an open heart and a caring soul. Im sure you will find that dream.
Take Care,
Carmen

Re: Love I want (User Rating: 1 )
by Markey on Wednesday, 16th October 2002 @ 06:25:49 PM AEST
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Thank you very much for your feedback, its inspiring. I am putting in more tonight. Would appreciate your comments. TY again.

Re: Love I want (User Rating: 1 )
by Markey on Wednesday, 16th October 2002 @ 06:26:38 PM AEST
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Thank you very much for your feedback, its inspiring. I am putting in more tonight. Would appreciate your comments. TY again.

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