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Array ( [sid] => 51537 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Tried To Kill My-Self Yesterday! [time] => 2004-06-12 06:42:04 [hometext] => It feels weird to think of my-self as still here. i got on the roof yesterday! AND WAS GOING T jUmP!!!! yet here i am today posting this! [bodytext] => My swollen pain,
Lead me to that roof.
I was so prepared…
I’ll use that as proof!
I’m not faking,
My pain inside!
You gotta be twisted!!
To say it’s a lie.
I some times see things,
That just ain’t there.
And recently they keep coming.
But in seconds/minutes disappear.
IT’S SO SCARY!!
I see these things in front.
They’re getting worse!
And have been growing over the months…

I saw my mum as a demon,
With this scary laughing face.
I open the car door so prepared to jump out!
My blood pumping. I started to scream.
I let on foot touch on the ground.
Started to shout!
She stopped to car I ran, and ran.
When I tripped, I pushed my-self up,
Then I kept on running.
As quick as I can!

I went back to my ward.
Stayed for a bit!
Saw my mum.
And I went skits.
Ran and ran.
Didn’t look back.
Got on the roof.
Close to the end… [comments] => 1 [counter] => 141 [topic] => 61 [informant] => deathdrop [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

I Tried To Kill My-Self Yesterday!

Contributed by deathdrop on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 06:42:04 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

My swollen pain,
Lead me to that roof.
I was so prepared…
I’ll use that as proof!
I’m not faking,
My pain inside!
You gotta be twisted!!
To say it’s a lie.
I some times see things,
That just ain’t there.
And recently they keep coming.
But in seconds/minutes disappear.
IT’S SO SCARY!!
I see these things in front.
They’re getting worse!
And have been growing over the months…

I saw my mum as a demon,
With this scary laughing face.
I open the car door so prepared to jump out!
My blood pumping. I started to scream.
I let on foot touch on the ground.
Started to shout!
She stopped to car I ran, and ran.
When I tripped, I pushed my-self up,
Then I kept on running.
As quick as I can!

I went back to my ward.
Stayed for a bit!
Saw my mum.
And I went skits.
Ran and ran.
Didn’t look back.
Got on the roof.
Close to the end…

Copyright Â© deathdrop ... [ 2004-06-12 06:42:04]
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Re: I Tried To Kill My-Self Yesterday! (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 10:47:50 PM AEST
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Oh Deathdrop, I'm so sorry......wish there was something I could do for you!
You live in another world....not too pleasant I would say........isn't there something they can do to help you in anyway!
Love and hugs
consue

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